· In the methodology there is a lack of explanation about what method is going to be used for the research and development (objective 2, hip n°1 and 3).
· Furthermore you don ‘t explain how you are going to study and analyze the economic growth and its relation with the ethanol and which data are going to be used for the research .
· If you mention an interview, you need to insert a copy of the list of question that will be ask and how you will use them in you investigation.