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Module 4: Report Writing and Research

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Research Reports 

Research

Research skills are important in both the academic and the work environment. During your career as a student, you have researched different subjects to gain knowledge. In the workplace, you may conduct research for numerous reasons, such as to determine the cost of new equipment, to gain an understanding of a technical term or concept, to summarize a procedure for your supervisor, or to uncover facts for a technical report.

To keep up with changes in technology, it is imperative that you gain familiarity with all available research methods. In the past, people typically performed research at a library. Today, they turn to the World Wide Web; however, technical writers can conduct research through numerous channels. Personal interviews, e-mail questionnaires, and listservs (programs by which e-mail messages are sent to a mailing list go out to all those on that list) can provide valid research opportunities.

Chances are, if you need to research a particular topic, your first source will be the Internet. There, you can find information from government organizations, academic institutions, commercial groups, and individuals. Remember, though, that not every site on the Web is a reliable source of information. Universities, for example, are more credible than obscure Web sites with a single author who lacks verifiable credentials. To conduct research on the Internet, follow these tips:

· Look for Web sites that end in .gov, .org, and .edu.

· For a .edu or other site, make sure you can find the author of the material.

· Check the author's credentials and see if he or she is referenced in the field.

· Find out whether the author has a bibliography or a works cited section, and check to ensure that his or her references are reputable (i.e., academic books, government journals, etc.).

· See whether the Web page has a publication date, and when the last update occurred.

· If you can't locate the origins of a Web page or its author, be aware that you may not have found a credible source.

Many groups, including federal agencies, offer online indexes and databases. These are generally broken down by subject matter (such as MEDLINE from the Community of Science (COS), which offers medical journals and health publications; or ERIC from the Institute of Education Sciences (IES) of the U.S. Department of Education, which provides literature on education from journals and other sources). Within each of these databases, you can drill down to relevant research materials by entering specific search requirements. UMUC's  Information and Library Services Web site  provides a wealth of up-to-date online indexes. You can also find this link in the Toolkit section of this course, if you would like to use it for your reference.

The type of research you'll perform will be determined by your audience and purpose. For example, if your supervisor wants you to report on the latest trends and developments in telecommuting, you might start with a database search for relevant periodical articles on the topic. You may also type keywords into Google or Ask.com and follow the leads that seem promising. If your supervisor wants to know the feasibility of implementing telecommuting as an option within your company, you might begin your research by creating a list of questions to ask your Human Resources department. You might interview your management team and survey employees to gather data and opinions. You would integrate your sources into your report by quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing.

Giving Credit

Every time you use a source for research, including colleagues and other interviewees, you need to give credit to the source. You must also provide a source for graphics, if you use images you did not create yourself. Depending on the style guide you use, you may provide one or more of the following:

· in-text citations in parentheses

· footnotes

· endnotes

· a reference, works cited, or bibliography section

In most technical fields, the American Psychological Association (APA) style is the preferred documentation method. In medical and scientific fields, the American Medical Association (AMA) and the Council of Science Editors (CSE) style guides are the standards. Depending on your field, you may also use the Modern Language Association (MLA) guide or the Chicago Manual of Style.

Table 4.1 shows links where you can access these style guides or find out how to obtain them. You can also find these links in the Toolkit section of this course, if you would like to use them for your reference. Sometimes, conducting an online search for a style guide will yield academic Web sites with relevant information.

Table 4.1 Style Guides

Purpose

Organization or Source

Web site

Technical writing

American Psychological Association (APA)

Online APA Style Guide

Medical writing

American Medical Association (AMA)

AMA Web site

Scientific writing

Council of Science Editors (CSE)

Online CSE Guide for Citations  (click on the last three links)

General/literary writing

Modern Language Association (MLA)

MLA Web site

General/literary writing; useful for a wide range of editorial questions and concerns

Chicago Manual of Style

Chicago Manual  Web site

Remember that the sources you use should support or refute your ideas. Your research should not replace your thoughts; rather, it should enhance them or provide validity. Use direct quotes sparingly unless your report relies heavily on interviews. Twenty-five words is considered the limit for one quote. When you quote, copy the source word-for-word and note it directly after the quote with an in-text citation or a footnote. Remember to place the quote in quotation marks. This step can be easily forgotten!

To avoid numerous quotes, you can paraphrase a source. When paraphrasing, rewrite the original information, varying both the words and the sentence structure. Do not include additional information. Be sure to cite the source immediately after the paraphrase, in the same manner as you would a quote.

If you need to incorporate longer secondary source material into your document, it may be best to summarize it. Your supervisor might ask you to review information in numerous reports, and to give a short account of what you have read. When you summarize, remember to write the original information in your own words and to make it as succinct as possible. Try to sum up an entire report in no more than a short paragraph with a citation.

Reports

Think about why we read reports. We want to stay informed about a particular topic in our field, to make a decision, to make an effective presentation, and/or to justify an action. When writing a report, we adapt the content and style to our audience's needs.

Types of reports include

· meeting minutes, to record discussions, actions, and results of a meeting

· status or progress reports, to update others on how projects are coming along, and to alert others to potential problems

· feasibility or evaluation reports, to assess various solutions, equipment, and personnel

· recommendations, to suggest solutions to a problem or optimal courses of action

· trip summaries, to report on discussions, actions, and results of business trips

· lab reports, to record the results of laboratory work

· incident/hazard/accident reports, to describe events, identify their causes and results, and reveal possible findings and/or solutions

These and other reports all fall under the categories of the two basic types of report: the short report (or memo report), and the long report (or formal or research report). All reports, like all letters, essays, and articles, have three main parts, including

· abstract, or summary

· body, or discussion section

· conclusion/recommendation

Long reports may have many more components; however, they still retain this basic structure.

A short report may address one person or several, and is typically written to an internal audience (within your company). Generally, longer reports are written for a variety of people who have disparate backgrounds and varying reasons for reading the report.

Think of the needs you would have to meet with a long report, such as a study on the benefits of incorporating an employee wellness plan, written to a client. Your client might send the report to his or her Human Resources department, to supervisors, and to a middle management team to gather feedback. How could you address the needs of these readers? You could write a background section for the supervisors explaining why competing companies have incorporated wellness plans. You might include clear definitions for the middle managers. You could add a section letting Human Resources know what its role would be in implementing such a plan. You would need to use headers to direct your readers to the sections of the report that would most interest them.

Many reports also contain graphics to break down information for readers. You can display percentages and facts in a table or graph. Be sure to number and label all graphics and to reference those graphics within the body of your report. Only use graphics that have a clear purpose and that support the content of your report. Graphics should not serve as decorations.

Short Report Organization

Clear organization is key to providing a roadmap for your readers. Four common types of organization are

1. classification

2. chronological organization

3. cause-and-effect

4. compare-and-contrast

Classification, or the grouping of items according to their qualities, is a common organization tool. If you were rearranging your closet, you might put shoes, pants, and shirts in different areas. You might even separate those items into smaller categories, such as running shoes, work shoes, dress shoes, beach shoes, etc. If you were writing a report on Atlanta as a destination for a conference, you might also separate your subjects, as shown in figure 4.1:

Figure 4.1 Classification Report Structure

I. Possible Hotels

A. Wyatt Hotel

B. Georgia Inn

C. Peachtree Convention Center

II. Possible Restaurants

A. Catfish Tavern

B. Lucy's

C. Green Light

III. Possible Entertainment

A. Ryder string quartet

B. Delaney's jazz band

and so on. You can use this type of structure even if you are discussing different items without any further breakdown in classification.

A chronological organization may work best for such documents as meeting minutes, timelines, or project schedules. Chronological organization requires you to segment information in increments of time or in order of occurrence. If you worked for a theater company, you might use a structure similar to that in figure 4.2 to record minutes at a meeting:

Figure 4.2 Chronological Report Structure

9:30    started meeting 9:35    planned seasonal budget 9:50    discussed hiring of new lighting designer 10:10  took coffee break 10:15  discussed problem with sound quality

and so on.

cause-and-effect structure shows how various events occurred or will occur. This type of organization can be used when reporting a problem. For example, if a poorly trained customer representative is causing numerous complaints, your boss might ask you to prepare a report on the situation. You might describe a skill the representative lacked, and then list examples of the type of complaint it caused, with examples. You would repeat this pattern until you exhausted the list of skills, or until you made your point. You might use the approach shown in figure 4.3:

Figure 4.3 Cause-and-Effect Report Structure

Representative A lacks the skill of diplomacy. This has caused the following complaints:

· He insulted Client A.

· He didn't apologize to Client B. about the late work service, resulting in a tense telephone exchange.

· He shouted at Client C.

Representative A is often late. This has caused the following problems:

· Client D's equipment went without repairs for a month.

· Client E called five times for help with a problem.

and so on.

compare-and-contrast structure analyzes different items or ideas, showing which features are superior. This type of organization can be useful in reports that evaluate equipment or give recommendations. Generally, you would group items either by criteria or by alternative. If you were evaluating two types of laptops for your field agents, the criteria would be the relevant features of the laptops, and the alternatives would be the laptops themselves. Before starting your report, you would need to determine which features of the laptops were important enough to analyze. Your agents might identify monitor size, battery life, and weight as the most important aspects of a laptop. Your supervisor might cite cost as the decision-making factor. Your organization structure would look like either figure 4.4 (by alternative) or figure 4.5 (by criteria):

Figure 4.4 Compare-and-Contrast Report Structure, by Alternative

IBM ThinkPAD X40

· Monitor size

· Battery life

· Weight

· Cost

Dell Latitude D620

· Monitor size

· Battery life

· Weight

· Cost

Figure 4.5 Compare-and-Contrast Report Structure, by Criteria

Monitor Size

· IBM ThinkPAD X40

· Dell Latitude D620

Battery Life

· IBM ThinkPAD X40

· Dell Latitude D620

Weight

· IBM ThinkPAD X40

· Dell Latitude D620

Cost

· IBM ThinkPAD X40

· Dell Latitude D620

You can use tables in this type of report to make information easy to understand at a glance. Tables 4.2 and 4.3 show how you can accomplish this:

Table 4.2 Compare-and-Contrast Table, by Alternative

IBM ThinkPAD X40

Dell Latitude D620

Monitor size

Monitor size

Battery life

Battery life

Weight

Weight

Cost

Cost

Table 4.3 Compare-and-Contrast Table, by Criteria

Monitor Size

Battery Life

Weight

Cost

IBM ThinkPAD X40

IBM ThinkPAD X40

IBM ThinkPAD X40

IBM ThinkPAD X40

Dell Latitude D620

Dell Latitude D620

Dell Latitude D620

Dell Latitude D620

Figure 4.6 shows a short report with poor organization. Scroll your mouse over the numbers to see the ways in which it could be improved.

Figure 4.6 Poorly Organized Short Report

From: Moyo Tutu, principal investigator, Mission Systems

To: Yung Chong, senior executive, Mission Systems

Date: 04/06/06

RE: My Trip Report  1

In accordance with your wishes to be kept informed  2  of developments in the field of computer software, I am filing the following trip report covering my recent visit to T-Data corporate headquarters at 55 Logan Circle, Salt Lake City, Utah. Although my flight from Cleveland left an hour late (at 10:05 a.m.), I got to Salt Lake City (after changing planes in Dallas) by 12:00 p.m. noon last Weds.  3  After lunch (see my expense records), I went out to the T-Data headquarters, where I was met by Guy DeFalco around 1:30 p.m. He is one of T-Data's best marketing representatives. Guy showed me their newest line of word processing and file management software.  4  Although I was impressed by the speed and simplicity of the new HyperText package and its ability to mesh with other software, I found the FileSort file management program to be slower and harder to use than our present FilePlan system.  5  HyperText has a lot of layout functions that are easy to use, and we could make good use of it if we decided to go to desktop publishing in the future, especially for our use in-house. We could use it to create things like company newsletters and promotional brochures.  6

My initial look at T-Data's software line took up most of my time that afternoon, but at 3:00 p.m., I did get to take a glimpse of one of their latest developments in computer hardware: a mini with wireless capability. This is what we are looking for if we want to interface our mainframe with our micros. For your information, the model number on this new minicomputer is WW EZ 123.  7  It could be the hardware we are looking for to replace our rapidly aging HP processors—the ones that are used in our accounts receivable offices. One other thing might be worth mentioning here: T-Data is offering a substantial discount to new corporate customers who are willing to replace their present line of micro processors with T-Data hardware. They'll cut by 50%. This, by the way, is the best offer I have seen in the past 6 months.  8

Moyo  9

Click on the pop-up below to discuss how you would organize this report differently.

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Think About It 4.1: Organizing the Report

For contrast, look at figure 4.7, which shows an improved version of the same report. Scroll your mouse over the numbers to find out why it is superior to the report in figure 4.6.

Figure 4.7 Organized Short Report

From: Moyo Tutu, principal investigator, Mission Systems  1

To: Yung Chong, senior executive, Mission Systems

Date: 04/06/06

RE: Evaluation of T-Data's Software and Hardware Products  2

ABSTRACT  3 I visited the T-Data headquarters in Salt Lake City, Utah on 4/1/06 to evaluate software and hardware products. One of T-Data's leading marketing representatives, Guy DeFalco, showed me their newest line of word processing and file management software, as well as their minicomputer. T-Data's word processing package and minicomputer would be valuable to our organization. T-Data is offering a 50 percent discount  4  on their minis.

NEW PRODUCTS  1 The bulk of my time was spent in evaluating T-Data's new word processing and file management software. However, I also had the opportunity to look at their latest developments in computer hardware.

Word Processing  5 The new HyperText package is a quick, easy-to-use word processor that meshes well with other software. This package also has layout functions that would be beneficial if we decided to go to desktop publishing. Our house organizations could use this feature to create company newsletters and promotional brochures.

File Management  5 The FileSort program is slower and harder to use than our present FilePlan system. FileSort took twice as long to upload an 800-megabyte file as our software, and I found it difficult to navigate the system hierarchy.

Computing  5 The WW EZ 123 minicomputer is an excellent candidate for replacing the rapidly aging HP processors in our accounts receivable offices. The mini's wireless capability also makes it a candidate for interfacing our mainframe with our micros. As an added incentive, T-Data is offering a 50 percent discount  6  to new corporate customers who are willing to replace their present line of microprocessors with T-Data hardware.

RECOMMENDATIONS  1 We should not pursue T-Data's FileSort program; however, I believe that we should further evaluate and consider the following T-Data products:  7

· HyperText – A quick, easy-to-use word processor with layout functions

· WW EZ 123 minicomputer – A wireless mini for accounts receivable

T-Data's offer to reduce the cost of the WW EZ 123 minicomputer by 50 percent  6  makes this the best proposal I have seen in the past six months.

Long Reports

Before you begin writing a long report, you need to do your homework. Regardless of whether your subject has been determined for you, or whether you have decided what you need to write about, be sure to analyze your audience. Long reports are often read by numerous readers; think about each person's needs, education, level of expertise, reasons for reading the report, etc.

Think of your primary audience first. Your primary audience is made up of the folks who will make decisions based on your report. Your secondary audience is made up of those people who will be affected by the actions of the primary readers. If you were writing a long report evaluating laptops for field agents, your primary audience would be the supervisor who controls the budget and who has the final say over the decision. You would need to make sure that the supervisor knew the bottom line of each purchase. The secondary audience would include those field agents who would use the new laptops on a daily basis. The agents would be much more concerned about the functionality of the laptops than about the cost.

When writing a long report, perform research as necessary. First, find out whether your organization has already compiled research on the subject. This type of information-gathering is known as secondary research. Review existing documents, determine whether you still need information, and conduct additional research as needed. New research you perform is called primary research.

Brainstorm your report by asking the journalistic questions whowhatwherewhenwhy, and how. Then, think of how to structure your report. If you are comparing the two laptops, make lists of the pros and cons of each system; if you are proposing changes to a process, explain why first, and then list possible changes.

A formal report is comprised of front matter, a body/discussion, and back matter. These sections contain several components:

I. Front matter

· transmittal letter or memo

· cover page

· abstract

· table of contents

· list of figures (optional)

II. Body/discussion

· introduction

· scope

· presentation and discussion of facts

· conclusion

· recommendations (optional)

III. Back matter

· works cited

· glossary of terms

· appendices

We elaborate on these components below.

Front Matter

Front matter introduces the main topics of the report and leads the reader to the body or discussion. Below, we discuss each of the components of front matter.

Transmittal Letter or Memo

Always send out long reports with a transmittal letter or memo. If the report is going outside the company, format the transmittal as a letter; if it is staying within the company, format the transmittal as a memo. In either case, the transmittal basically states, "Here is the report I promised to write." The letter or memo is generally one page; it briefly discusses the purpose of the report, and includes contact information. Conclude the transmittal by politely stating what you would like your readers to do after reviewing the report, i.e., "Please call my assistant to set up a meeting to discuss our findings."

Cover Page

Your cover page should look professional. It may contain your company's logo or a graphic relevant to the report. Do not place annoying clipart on the cover page to "dress it up." If you are going to use a graphic, it should lend meaning to the report. If it does not, omit it. At a minimum, your cover page should contain the title of the report, the main readers' names, and your name, along with those of anyone else who helped prepare the document. It should also include a date, and may list a version number.

Abstract

There are two types of abstracts: descriptive and informative. A descriptive abstract is similar to a summary, in which you condense the discussion section of your report. An informative abstract differs from a descriptive abstract in that it states the results of the report. An informative abstract provides data as well as information, and includes your concluding ideas and recommendations.

Your abstract will help your readers determine whether they want or need to read your entire report, or whether they should route your report to someone else. For this reason, the abstract should be able to stand on its own. Keep in mind that your report is not a mystery novel; it should not build up to a surprising conclusion. You should "give away" all the important facts up front. Provide significant details in your abstract, such as how long it will take to complete a contract, how much new equipment will cost, how many work hours are needed to win a proposal, etc. If you are not sure which type of abstract to write, create an informative one.

You cannot begin your abstract until you complete the report, for the sheer reason that it is impossible to summarize what you have not yet written. Click on the pop-up below to see if you can distinguish a descriptive from an informative abstract.

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Think About This 4.2: Abstracts

Table of Contents and List of Figures

The front matter should also contain a table of contents and a list of figures, if necessary. These guide your readers through the report and let them know what to expect. They also give your audience an easy way to locate specific information.

Body/Discussion

The body makes up the bulk of the report and contains all the information relevant to the readers. It should be as long as it needs to be to get the main points across, but should not be padded with fanciful language or unnecessary anecdotes. Below, we discuss each of the components of the body/discussion.

Introduction

Your introduction is the first section of the body of your report. It differs from the abstract in that it acquaints your readers with the main themes of your report without providing a summary. The introduction should identify the main problem or topic, the purpose of the report, and the key factors involved. For example, an introduction to the laptop evaluation report would need to mention the items evaluated (the two types of laptops), why the equipment is being evaluated (because supervisor Fran Kennedy wants to upgrade 800 field examiners' systems), and how the equipment is being evaluated (through a comparison of monitor size, battery life, weight, and cost).

Scope

In the scope section of a report, you state what factors are included in the report and what issues are not discussed. Break your information down into categories such as project goals, deadlines, money, equipment, work hours, etc. Also include any limitations to your work: "This comparison of the IBM ThinkPAD X40 and the Dell Latitude D620 presents an analysis of four major features of each laptop; however, this report does not contain information about any other laptop." You may want to provide a description of the people who helped create or contribute to the report, naming the organizations they represent. You might also include a "roadmap" of the report, in which you explain to your readers how many sections the report contains as well as the information that can be found in each section.

Presentation and Discussion of Facts

When organizing your report, be sure to provide background information for readers who may need additional information. You might, for example, include a review of previous research in a background section. Is there a timeline of events that your readers will want to see? Does your audience need to know your rationale for writing the report?

To construct the main body of your report, employ one of the modes of organization, such as classification, chronological organization, cause-and-effect, and compare-and-contrast, or perhaps a combination of two or more. Reporters use a journalistic, or inverted pyramid, style. They provide the most important facts first, with the least important at the end of the article. Whatever organizational structure you choose, make good use of headings and subheadings. Instead of titling parts of your report with their generic names (IntroductionScopeBody, etc.), use meaningful headings such as shown in the sample report outline in figure 4.8:

Figure 4.8 Specific Headings

1. Field Examiners' Work Requirements

1.1 Overseas 1.2 In the U.S.

2. Laptop Features Breakdown

2.1. Dell Latitude D620 Review 2.2. IBM ThinkPAD X40 Review

3. Laptop Price Breakdown

3.1. Dell Latitude D620 Review 3.2. IBM ThinkPAD X40 Review

Conclusion and Recommendations

Most reports conclude with either a summary to highlight the important information in the report, and/or a recommendation to suggest how to solve a problem or make an improvement. Many reports employ a mix of these.

Regardless of how you conclude your report, it needs to provide some meaning to the report, and it should be brief. Figure 4.9 shows the conclusion of a report evaluating laptops. Scroll your mouse over the numbers to see what the author has done to make it an effective end to the main body of the report.

Figure 4.9 Report Conclusion

To perform their work effectively, the field examiners must have dependable, sturdy, and lightweight laptops.  1  In addition, they need laptops powerful enough to handle a vast array of complex formulas and spreadsheets, as well as financial auditing software to assist them in determining whether the institutions are meeting OTS guidelines for safety and soundness.  2 Having researched the IBM ThinkPad X40 and Dell Latitude D620, I recommend buying the Dell Latitude D620 for the OTS examiners.  3

Although the IBM has weight, keyboard, and battery advantages over the Dell, the Dell has the overall advantage in computer processor power, disk space, RAM, wide screen format, multi-level data security, battery life, rapid battery charge time, and wireless and broadband technologies.  4  In addition, the Dell laptop costs $200 to $400 less than the IBM ThinkPad.  4  The savings associated with the purchase of the Dell will be even greater because OTS is an existing Dell customer, and qualifies for a bulk rate discount.  4  The Dell has just about everything the field examiners need to perform their duties. Additionally, the Dell has the new wireless and broadband technologies already built in,  4  which will prevent us from incurring costs if we develop the overseas market and/or go wireless.  5

Back Matter

The back matter of a report starts on the page after the conclusion. Below, we discuss each of the components of back matter.

Works Cited

In the works cited or references page, you list all the sources you used for research or for quotations as you composed the report. Using the APA, CSE, AMA, Chicago, or MLA style, be sure to reference all books, journals, newspapers, Web sites, and other source of information. Alphabetize your references, and include a double space between each listing.

Glossary of Terms

Include a glossary of terms for those readers who may need a refresher or further explanation of technical terms. Alphabetize this list, and include a double space between each listing. Keep in mind that some workplaces prefer the glossary at the beginning of the report rather than at the end.

Appendices

Use appendices to provide supplemental information for your readers. For instance, if you interviewed the field examiners to determine their work needs for a laptop, you might want to list your interview questions along with the results you gathered in an appendix. Materials for appendices include brochures, questionnaires, previous reports, maps, illustrations, etc. This material is generally not discussed in the report itself, though you should refer your readers to appendices whenever appropriate: "For completed field examiners' questionnaires, see Appendix A." Label each appendix with a letter (i.e., Appendix B, Appendix C), and number the pages accordingly (i.e., B-1, C-1, etc.).

In figure 4.10, you can see the various components of a long report. Put the components in the correct category in the table, in the order in which they should appear. Correct answers will stick.

Module 5: Presentations

Commentary

Topics

Presentations Organization Visual Aids Conclusion

Presentations

At some point in your career, you will need to prepare a presentation. In the workplace, it is rare to memorize pages of text or to read a manuscript word-for-word. The most common form of presentation is an extemporaneous speech, or a brief, informal description of a process or a project you are working on. You can also make a formal presentation that involves following an outline and using visual aids, such as PowerPoint slides or handouts. This type of presentation is normally rehearsed in advance. In this module, we focus on formal presentations. Whether your talk is slotted for five minutes or an hour, you'll need to carefully plan your message and analyze your audience.

Audience Needs

Think about the individuals you encounter in your professional life. Chances are, you'll find yourself making a presentation to these folks. Just as you analyze your audience before writing a communication piece, you'll want to plan your presentation to meet the needs of those who will see it. People may come to your talk with different technical skills, educational backgrounds, and experience levels. The more you know about your audience members, the better you can tailor your presentation to suit their requirements.

Audiences can range from a group of peers to a gathering of professionals from other industries to a selection of clients who know little about your field. Think of your participants' level of involvement in the issues you will discuss, what they will do with the information you present, and how they most likely view your topic. Think about the type of presentation your audience members expect (long, brief, detailed, informal, formal), what they know about your subject, and what they want to know.

Once you analyze your audience, you'll have a better idea of how to open your presentation, organize your information, present visual aids, clarify jargon, and prepare for feedback. By answering the audience analysis questions from module 2, you'll have a solid understanding of the needs of your participants. You can find these questions in the Toolkit section of this course. After you have evaluated your audience, you'll want to determine the main purpose of your presentation.

Presentation Purpose

What is the purpose of your presentation? Has a coworker asked you to present a seminar about how to use Visio to document a change process in the workplace? Are you an engineer who has been asked by a new customer to demonstrate how a wire stripper functions? Are you a middle manager trying to convince your supervisor to purchase cellular phones for your account representatives?

Presentations vary from training sessions to persuasive speeches to demonstrations to informative talks. You'll need to establish your purpose to determine the tone you will use and the ways in which you will achieve your goal.

If you are presenting for a training session, you'll need to follow an exact sequence and be prepared to answer numerous questions. If you are presenting a proposal for the purchase of cellular phones, you'll want to include visual aids showing a comparison of different models and a list of features and prices. Just like a report, your presentation needs a purpose statement that lets your audience know exactly what you plan to discuss. Then, you can focus on organizing your presentation.

Organization

Just like each type of technical communication we have examined, a formal presentation consists of an introduction (opening), body (discussion), and conclusion (closing). You'll want to create an outline of each of these sections to keep your talk focused and organized.

Introduction

Your introduction needs to capture your audience's attention. It is crucial to your presentation, and sets the tone for the entire session. If you sound nervous or confused at the beginning of your talk, you may find it difficult to gain your audience's confidence. Conversely, if you connect with your listeners and break the ice, they will be more likely to listen to what you have to say.

You can use a variety of ways to begin your presentation. Make eye contact with your audience. Begin with an anecdote, or thank the participants for coming. Some presenters like to lead with a quote or a joke, some prefer to start with a list of facts, and others may open with a question to engage the audience's attention: "How much time do you spend writing and reading e-mail messages on a daily basis? It may shock you to learn. . ." However you plan to open your presentation, be sure to rehearse to ensure a successful delivery.

Next, you'll want to deliver your purpose statement and present an overview of key points. Remember that your audience members may not have the means or the time to read a transcript of your presentation, so be sure to limit the number of points so as to not overwhelm them.

The following case study highlights the need for a strong introduction. Read the scenario and think of how you would introduce the presentation. In the pop-up below, discuss how you would begin, what would be your purpose statement, and what would constitute your key points.

Figure 5.1 Security Trouble at New Beta Company: Presenting Your Case

You work for New Beta Company, a small organization that hosts Web sites. You enjoy your job, but you are afraid that your customers are at serious risk. The organization has no security or data protection in place to safeguard their Web sites. Although your supervisors don't consider this a problem, you know that New Beta Company is poised to lose clients and reputation because of its lack of security.

You have put together a presentation to explain to your bosses why New Beta Company should implement a security system. Your speech focuses on the need to purchase and install a firewall server, to perform backups via patches and KDE Disk archiver (KDar), and to document all security processes. The one part of the presentation you haven't yet planned is your introduction. You are now thinking of how to create a strong opener to grab your audience's attention.

Click on the pop-up below to plan your introduction.

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Think About It 5.1: Planning the Introduction

Body

Organize the body of your presentation so that your audience can follow your ideas easily. Provide details to support your purpose statement and your key points. Use the same organizational approaches you would use in writing (classification, chronological organization, compare-and-contrast, cause-and-effect). If you establish a structure and make that structure clear to your audience, you will help your listeners understand the main topics and subtopics. Unless you are using handouts, your audience members will be listening and not reading. Because they will not be able to review what you have said, you'll need to explicitly identify your main topics and ideas.

As in technical writing, use direct and clear language. Make your presentation as short and as simple as possible. Remember to emphasize sequence by using phrases such as firstsecondnextfinally, etc. This will help your audience to understand the direction of your presentation. Include summaries and conclusions at the end of each major discussion point.

When you organize your presentation, think of topics about which your audience may want additional information, or issues on which your listeners might express doubt or concern. Stimulate thought by asking questions throughout your presentation, or by involving the participants in activities.

Conclusion

Don't neglect the importance of a real conclusion, or closing. Your conclusion is your last chance to leave the audience with a positive impression of you and your presentation. In your conclusion, summarize the main topics and state how your work relates to the issues you have raised. Let your listeners know how they should use the information you have just presented. If additional steps need to be taken, outline those steps for your audience. Be sure to end on a positive note, and to keep your tone upbeat.

Be prepared to field questions during your conclusion. If you do not know how to answer a query, do not fake a response. State that you are unsure, but that you will research the situation and get back to the person. Maintain a sense of humor during the question-and-answer process; listeners may air grievances, express frustrations, or take up time with long-winded and irrelevant remarks. Do not take criticism personally. Turn your full attention on each questioner, maintaining eye contact and reassuring the person that you understand what he or she is saying, even if you do not have a ready solution.

Visual Aids

Visual aids are powerful tools that can improve understanding of your ideas and add credibility to your work. These aids help your audience focus on your message, and enhance retention of the topic. Whether you use a whiteboard, a PowerPoint presentation, or transparencies, be sure to smoothly integrate your visual aids into your speech. Keep in mind that, while visual aids may add to your presentation, they should not become the presentation.

Visual aids can include

· posters

· flip charts

· chalkboards

· whiteboards

· transparencies

· handouts

· films, videotapes, DVDs, laser disks, audio tapes, or CD-ROMs

· physical objects, such as props or models

· computer presentations, such as PowerPoint slides or Excel spreadsheets

As you can see, visual aids range from simple posters to expensive multimedia displays. Select your media according to your audience, your budget, and your capabilities. Keep in mind that the more technology you employ, the more time you will need to ensure that the equipment is functioning properly. It may help to have an assistant on hand to run computer presentations or pass out handouts.

Visual aids can illustrate a multitude of concepts. If you are presenting data to your audience, choose a table, graph, or chart. If you are showing steps or features of a product, use slides with numbered or bulleted lists. You can also show an outline of your presentation, broken down into key topics. You may want to use visual aids to define important and relevant terms. If you are explaining how a particular item or object functions, you can bring in a model, photograph, or drawing of the item.

If you include visual aids in your presentation, describe and reference each aid. Use graphics and items that are relevant to your purpose statement. Do not just display images for the sake of having something to show your audience. Only use clip art if it adds substance to your presentation.

When creating visual aids, keep in mind the elements of document design. Simplicity is key. A visual aid should look balanced and pleasing to the eye. Use consistent design elements to unify the appearance of your visual aids. Do not confuse your audience with a blizzard of fonts, styles, and colors. When working in PowerPoint, use the master template to ensure consistent font treatment.

PowerPoint Slides

PowerPoint is one of the most powerful presentation design programs. It appears frequently in the workplace because it is easy-to-use, portable, and economical. If you are creating PowerPoint slides to enhance your presentation, keep the following tips in mind:

· Title each slide, and list key points.

· Use a consistent style.

· Balance text and graphics.

· Use the spell-checker.

· Cite your references correctly.

· Use visual effects sparingly. They should enhance your presentation; not distract from it.

· Do not use more than three font styles.

· Do not use more than seven lines of text per slide.

· Use a simple and clean typeface.

· Use slides to show information best presented visually. Do not use them to display the words you are speaking, but to illustrate key points, data, statistics, figures, etc.

The PowerPoint slides below show widely different styles. Review the slides, then determine which are successful and which are not. Click on the pop-ups to explain your answers.

Figure 5.2 Presentation Tips

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Think About It 5.2: Presentation Tips Slide

Figure 5.3 Readability Tips

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Think About It 5.3: Readability Tips Slide

Figure 5.4 Presentation Paragraph

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Think About It 5.4: Presentation Paragraph Slide

Conclusion

If you need further help in creating a presentation, the  Toastmasters International Web site  can assist you. You can also find this link in the Toolkit section of this course, if you would like to use it for your reference.

By now, you have learned much about how to write various documents for the workplace, and how to give a successful presentation. Practice will help you become a better writer; so will proofreading. When in doubt, it can help to have a colleague read or view your work to give you feedback. The Toolkit section of this course has many resources to assist you in current and future projects. You may print them for your reference.