Revising assignments

For most articles, people do not see what is going on and creates a less attractive paper. The audience for this person is one who may be interested in this type of work of just photography in general. Each person that may come across something as this and may be interested could be various types of people. The topic has a lot to do with how it is written and how people view it. If the paper does not go along with the title and how they thought it would be, the reader might not be as interested as they thought. The relation with the audience can be easily seemed as a great connection. With the descriptions of everything and how everything is done makes a person more interested even if it is not a daily topic for most. The writer also says in details about something that is very eye catching. Portrait segmentation can be regarded as a process that dividing portrait and background into their respective coherent regions. In our works, portrait pictures are acquired by taking photos under blue background. According to the coherence of the pixels color, portrait, and background should belong to the respective color clustering theoretically (Portrait Beautification). This has a lot of descriptions and makes people want to read more about. In opinion, there could be more than one audience. This description, as stated, helps people that are not even interested in the topic to have a sense of interest.

In order to identify the tone, the reader should try to identify the emotional meaning of the essay. Tone is the writer or the speaker's implied attitude toward his or her subject and/or the reader or audience. Writers convey their attitudes in the words they choose and in the style in which they write, in turn creating the atmosphere or mood of the essay. The choice of a single word can change the tone of a paragraph, even an entire essay. The tone of the article helps people tell how the author feels about the subject mostly by adjectives, other word choices, comparisons, etc. For this article, the author seems to be interested and excited about a topic such as this. From the descriptions of how everything is worded makes a person seem to think how the writer feels about the topic and work that comes along with it. Not many articles of this sort have an author who is interested as the people are in this one. The details that are given shows the interest taken in this and the interest that they hope to bring from the people reading it.

In this article, there are various images that help explain what it being talked about. Each set of the photos helps with demonstration as they are explained underneath. It can heighten and refine emotion as well as meaning. Visual images can help people understand the true meaning of a novel/book or other ideas, since they can picture them in their minds. Pictures in the books are used to capture the imagination of people and teach him/her morals and more. By seeing the pictures in the books the text gives the child the imagination and the illustration gives the person the setting. Without illustrations an article, book, and more that explains something can be hard to visualize and understand for most people. If a person, as me, needs illustration for something to be more understood and it’s not there, it makes it more difficult.

There are various types of articles. Some have a certain tone, how it is written and just could be interesting in many ways. If an article is explanatory many things need to come along with it. Photos with subtitles should be included for a better understanding. Visual images are the most important when reading about something. Not every person knows how to draw the attention when writing. Mostly it is easier if things are explained in a manner where most everyone can understand it. Portrait beautification technology has important meaning about computer-generated background photography and augments reality said. The work provided has a set of united portrait beautification methods are raised. Each person that may come across something as this and may be interested could be various types of people. The topic has a lot to do with how it is written and how people view it. In opinion, there could be more than one audience. This description, as stated, helps people that are not even interested in the topic to have a sense of interest.

Works cited

Liu, Heng, Jinqi Yan, Zushu Li, and Hua Zhang. "Portrait Beautification: A fast and robust approach." Science Direct. Image and Vision Computing, 11 Dec 2006. Web. 30 Sep 2013. <www.sciencedirect.com>.

Atef,

I know that reading and writing in a second language can be difficult. However, reading the prompt and the sample rhetorical essay is very important if you want to do a good job writing a paper. I read your whole paper, but I stopped commenting and marking on the second page because I had no idea what you were writing about.

The first paragraph, as I noted, has to tell the reader what the article is that you are analyzing, who the author is, where it was published, and when it was published. It then has to provide a thesis with an assessment of the effectiveness of the rhetorical strategies in the article. From there the paper needed to provide the credentials of the author and a brief summary of the article as well as the audience and purpose of the article. After that, the paper needs to provide an analysis of the rhetorical strategies of the article: tone, ethos, logos, pathos… There is almost none of that in this essay.

See the rubric below. (It continues on the next page.)

English 100 Rhetorical Analysis Evaluation

Name: Atef AlShehri Score: 36 / 60 ( D- )

Use this rubric to understand what you did right and where you went wrong in your assignment.