Grammar HW

Focus Exercise: Practice II Name

Rewrite the sentences below by concentrating on replacing the subjects OR the verbs or both with better, more appropriate choices, as we practiced in class. Try to preserve as nruch of the sentence's original meaning as possible-don't just omit important, critical words or information if you can't figwe out how to incorporate it. Figure out a way! This is practice. The resulting sentence must make sense.

1. In the article "The State is Looking After You," written by The Economist, it states that some people think the government violates their rights.

2. With the bringing of slaves to the West Indies, it created a population of mixed-race people.

3. In order to grow as a person, mistakes must be made.

4. According to the author, by having this method, the way of our education will drastically improve.

wever, after reading Paulo Freire's essay about the banking concept of education, it ces me to analyze the purpose and meaning of education.