English Essay

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Introduction

My name is Ali Alsarraf, I’m twenty years old and I’m a full time international student from Kuwait, I’m currently a sophomore student studying mechanical engineering at Cal state Fullerton to get my bachelor’s degree and hopefully my masters. I have a lot of hobbies and inters; I love hanging out with my family and gather with my friends at the hookah bar. I’m fun to be around with, I love different types of music and I love video games such as battlefield and World Of War Craft. I am a fan of the walking dear series and game of thrones. I am a car enthusiast who drives a white Nissan 350z and loves drifting and racing

Thesis;

Please write me a thesis statement about the paragraphs about Family, Car, Apartment, and School and please include the Adjective, which is Fear in the thesis

Family:

-Fear that I cant be with my niece ( Zaina ) and my nephew ( Ali ) growing up , zaina is almost 1 years and Ali is 4 years, Example : taking them to school or attending their birthday parties or missing on my nieces first Word and not being able to attend the graduation of my other nephew Ali as well .

- I fear that I will miss beautiful moments with my family such as vacations, celebrating Kuwait’s national day, which is on the 25th of this month, and not being able to attend my brother graduation Abdulaziz from Flight school that will work in Kuwait airways.

- Fear that I cant assist my family If they go through bad days; like when my father was admitted to the hospital I was not there to help him or stand by his side moreover I was not even told that he was sick fearing that I will not do well at my studies

- Fear that I will not be able to help my eldest sister who is divorced with taking my eldest nephew Ali to the hospital since he goes through a lot of bad health conditions.

Car

I Fear that I will get in jail because I like racing and drifting, because one time I was racing with a friend on the 57 south high way and we were going about 110 mph I drive a white Nissan 350z model 2004 and I was racing a ford mustang 2005 and we got pulled over by the high patrol but thanks to god he only gave us a ticket which was about 750 dollar and a warning that if he caught us again he will put us in jail.

I Fear that I will wreck my car because of my to drift because recently I have spent over a 1000$ to repair the rack and pinion which was damaged while I was drifting

· Other incident was when I was pulled over because I forgot to turn my lights on and at that time I didn’t not have a California drives license which made me afraid that I was going to be admitted to the jail and get my car toad but the police officer was a nice person and he only warned me and told me that I need to get my license as soon as possible because other police offers might not be nice as he was not me.

Apt

I keep my apartment neat and clean fearing that it will get dirty; because one time I was neglecting my apartment and after a couple of days it got really messy which took me a longer time to get it clean and not seeing my apartment clean makes my mood bad.

· I always pay my bills at time because am afraid that I will loose my beautiful apartment and I fear that I will have bad records under my name which might cause me problems in the future if I want to rent in a new place.

· _ Fear for my apartment from drunk people because every week end at my complex their are parties, at some times drunk people get into my apartment and it escalates to some time to be problems such as once there were a group of drunk people that were constant on knocking the door and ringing the bell and I had a calculus exam that needed studying so I called the complex security and he came to mange the drunk people.

· Afraid that my apartment will get stolen because at one incident a group of guys tried to break in which made me content the office complex and they had to change the door locks.

School

_ I always keep my grades high because am afraid that I will fail which will cause me problems with my government because I need to maintain a 2.0 GPA. And if I failed I m obligated to pay all the money that was provide to by the scholar ship system

· Last semester I almost failed my biology class but because of the fear of failing that will Couse me problems with Kuwait cultural office I studied harder and spent most of my time studying at the library so I managed to pass with a C grade which is the minimum requirement for engineering to pass the class.

· I’m afraid that I cant keep my overall GPA above 3.0 because in the future I am aiming to peruse my masters degree and maybe a PHD because I, majoring in mechanical engineering and is said that it is the hardest field of engineering among all the rest.