Nursing

How We May Reduce High Cost of Medication by Adeshina Odueko

WORD COUNT 561 CHARACTER COUNT 2973

TIME SUBMITTED 01-OCT-2013 12:50PM PAPER ID 357600726

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1.1. what follows is not an exec summary

an exec summary is not necessary for this paper

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1stP1stP first person: do not use first person (I, we, you, us, etc) in APA papers; it is not considered formal academic or scholarly writing

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A w k.A w k. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.

2.2. is this the research question idea you are presenting?

section headingssection headings Review APA Headings. Headings are titles of different sections of a formal written assignment. They can be used to add structure, organize ideas, and tell the reader what content to expect. Additional Comment: introduction is not a section heading option just leave it blank

3.3. where?

S upportS upport Support Needed: A well-written paper will include strong support for its thesis. Support for your thesis should come from primary (original documents, interviews, and personal experiences) and secondary (information that has been processed or interpreted by someone else) sources. To use your support effectively, you must elaborate upon the information, quotations, and examples taken from your sources and connect them to your thesis. It is also important to remember to cite the sources of the evidence and support you use in your paper.

use of thisuse of this use of this - always state what you are referring to for clarity in writing

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4.4. who?

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6.6. What prinicple? this is not clear to the reader

A w k.A w k. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.

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7 .7 . The topic of this paragraph (the research idea?) is not entirely clear - perhaps once it is backed by literature the concepts can be more carefully articulated

8.8. what is this?

9.9. Type of research? Isn't you referring to the current research project?

10.10. good

use single quotesuse single quotes this is an expression; use single quotes like this: 'spot on' in order to indicate a slang or conversational phrase.

11.11. who is the audience?

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12.12. good

13.13. of what?

14.14. concepts that e and f are referring to should be discussed in the beginning of this essay

15.15. same here

16.16. cite them here

Run- onRun- on Run-on sentence: The sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or semicolon.

17 .17 . indicate that scales are effective?

18.18. this is a good source

19.19. plural

1stP1stP first person: do not use first person (I, we, you, us, etc) in APA papers; it is not considered formal academic or scholarly writing

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20.20. use the plural

21.21. is this your topic?

22.22. new page per APA - review format for reference page

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