Revise the Communication planning sheet. Then write a business memo about the case study.
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helpful_feedback.docxThere are a few punctuation mistakes in the text.
In the first step, audience, the audience is the boss. Jack Stack will have to address the memo to his boss with a request for money and approval for this workshop.
Regarding your emotion, I think you need to touch on all of the emotions that you think and want the audience to feel. For example, if you are going to start with the issues in your body then your audience will most likely go through some sort of worry or concern. Later, they will get to your passionate and enthusiastic emotions after they hear your solution. Also, it is unclear if you are referring to the audience or the speaker's emotions. You may want to make that clear in your planning worksheet next time.
The format refers to the format of your presentation to your boss. In this case, the assignment requires a memo to be written. I believe you were thinking of the format for the potential training. Remember, this planning work sheet only refers to the memo you are writing to your boss, not the actual training.
For Visuals, remember that you are only writing a memo to your boss. You may not have an opportunity to provide a PowerPoint presentation
