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1. Paper provides a clear position statement in an introduction that arouses reader’s interest 4) I like how you brought up that there currently are plenty of underage drinkers even with the legal drinking age being 21.
2. Paper provides a clear focus throughout 3) There are times when there is too much filler in some of the paragraphs.
3. Reasons for position clearly stated and backed by relevant evidence in the form of examples, quotes, etc. 4
4. Paper is written from an appropriate perspective 4
5. Ideas in paper are ordered logically with appropriate connects within and between paragraphs 4
6. Paper has an ending that adequately concludes the piece 4 Great job; the last few sentences are a little hard to read fluidly though.
7. The paper is free of virtually free of grammatical, mechanical, and spelling errrors 3) There are a few times where there are some run-on sentences or sentences right after each other that say the same thing almost. You can cut the sentences in half to cover the two subjects.
incorrect subject-verb agreement
x run-ons
fragment
x omitted words that interrupt meaning
incorrect verb usage
shifts in verb tenses
x incorrect use of common words
incorrect use of pronouns
capitalization problems
x comma problems
apostrophes used incorrectly or missing
x semicolons misused or missing
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