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Lessons  Writing - Pax Romana

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Title

Writing - Pax Romana

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Grade Scale

Points (max 100.0)

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Assignment Instructions

In a five paragraph essay, explain what the Pax Romana was, and what Roman life was like during the

period.

Please be sure to include:

- Life for normal citizens

- Political changes

- Lasting influence of Rome during this time

Excellent Satisfactory Needs

Improvement Unsatisfactory

Not

Demonstrated

Thesis or

introductory

paragraph

Contains a well

focused and

sophisticated

thesis that

establishes a

clear point of

view.

Addresses all

parts of the

essay prompt

and references

the main

points of the

essay.

Thesis

paragraph is

loosely related

to the prompt.

May not

reference the

supporting

points of the

essay. May be a

simple

rephrasing of

the essay

prompt.

Thesis is loosely

related to the

prompt but may

not establish a

clear point of

view. May not

effectively

summarize the

supporting

points of the

essay.

Thesis in unclear,

confusing or

incomplete.

Thesis may not

address the essay

prompt.

Does not meet

expectations.

Quality of

Information

Thesis is clearly

supported by a

substantial

amount of

accurate

information

Thesis is

supported by

some

information

from the

lessons or

Thesis is

supported by a

limited amount

of information

from the lessons

or outside

Thesis is

supported by

little or no

information from

the lessons or

outside research.

Information

Does not meet

expectations.

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from the

lessons or

outside

research.

outside

research. There

may be minor

inaccuracies.

research. There

may be

significant

inaccuracies.

Information

provided may be

off topic or

contain serious

errors.

Analysis

Sophisticated

analysis

attracts the

interest of the

reader and

effectively

explains how

the

information

provided

supports the

thesis.

Provides some

analysis

explaining the

link between

the content and

the thesis

meant to spark

interest of the

reader. There

may be some

minor mistakes

in analysis or

analysis may be

incomplete.

Contains limited

or flawed

analysis or

analysis linking

information to

the thesis is

incomplete.

Essay may

appear as a

series of loosely

or unrelated

facts.

Essay lacks

analysis or

contains analysis

that results in a

confusing and

ineffective

response to the

prompt.

Does not meet

expectations.

Organization

and Writing

Conventions

Essay is well

organized with

a clear thesis

paragraph,

body and

conclusion.

Minimal, if any

errors in

sentence

structure,

excellent word

choice, few, if

any errors in

grammar and

mechanics

Essay

demonstrates

adequate

organization

that enables a

clear

presentation of

ideas.

Occasional

errors in

sentence

structure and/or

grammar and

mechanics that

do not

significantly

lessen the

effectiveness of

the essay.

There are some

problems with

organization

that hurt the

effectiveness of

the essay. May

also contain

significant errors

in sentence

structure and/or

unacceptable

errors in

grammar and

mechanics.

The information

in the report is

unorganized

and/or there may

be numerous

errors in

sentence

structure,

grammar and

mechanics. This

score may also be

assigned to a

minimal or

inadequate

response.

Does not meet

expectations.

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