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MWP #1
Rough Draft
Length and Formatting: 2-3 pages, typed, double-spaced, Black 12-point Times New Roman font, using standard MLA format.
Assignment : Submit a completed version of your paper following the constraints of the MWP #1 essay’s instructions.
What is a Rough Draft: A rough draft is a version of your essay that is raw and unpolished, containing the main ideas put together in a coherent way. A rough draft is about making sure your ideas are present and laid out clearly (remove holes from your writing).
Purpose: Writing a rough draft is an essential part of the writing process and is an opportunity to write your first ideas and thoughts on paper. The sole purpose of a rough draft is to give you a place to start to formally put together your ideas from your mind map and sentence outline. Additionally, writing a rough draft lets you gauge if you need to do more research or change the purpose of the writing. What do I need to write a rough draft?
Constraints: Read and review the essay instructions and make sure you are meeting the minimum requirements.
MWP1Instructions1.docx
MWP #1:
Profile of a Culture or Ethnic Group
Weight: 20% of final grade
Length and Formatting: 2-3 pages, typed, double-spaced, Black 12-point Times New Roman font, using standard MLA format.
Assignment Preparation: Brainstorm about a culture or ethnic group. (Useful for Mind Map Assignment) Think of all the ways that a culture or ethnic group has impacted the way individuals live, learn, and behave socially. Next, beside each of your top picks with the category’s, clarify for yourself why that impacts the culture or ethnic group specifically. Then write for 5-10 minutes about what outsiders in general might think about the culture or ethnic group. After this, list who on Campus or within a community might be a good insider for information regarding the culture or ethnic group, and why?
Assignment: Write a profile of a culture or ethnic group that surrounds beliefs, education, and social preferences. Remember this assignment is not about you but about profiling a culture or ethnic group, therefore the essay should be written in 3rd person.
Work to Describe the culture or ethnic groups key features: What makes it a distinct culture or ethnic group, and what experiences or outcomes may someone have who enters that culture or ethnic group reasonably expect?
The profile you provide should work to enlighten your readers about the culture or ethnic group that you have chosen. Your readers should leave your essay not with a general encyclopedia-level understanding of the culture or ethnic group, but with a refreshed and expanded understanding—beyond common knowledge or stereotypes—of what the culture or ethnic group concerns. Focus your paper on 3 key takeaways for your readers.
Audience: First-year college students who have not thought extensively about other cultures or ethnic groups in which you have chosen to write about. They are comprised of an indifferent audience that encounters your essay in a booklet called “Campus Life” written for undergraduates and focusing on the many options for work and study at the College.
Research: If you choose to obtain outside sources you are limited to 2 sources only. Do not use Google. Resources that can be used for this assignment should only be comprised of in-class text, Jstor, or the library. If you choose to utilize quotes from these sources for this paper, you will need to make sure you are introducing the quote or quotes correctly, make sure that it is absolutely necessary to have the author's words exactly and not your own words.
Rationale: This assignment forces you to describe and explain a topic with a sense of your purpose and audience—fundamental concerns for anyone who wishes to write rhetorically. Furthermore, it pushes you to be specific, to commit to 3 key points rather than try to list and explain several points about your topic. Doing this will give you practice organizing your ideas differently than via the five-paragraph theme; this is a crucial step for college writers.
MWP1SentenceOutlineWorksheet.docx
Sentence Outline
Title: A Profile of Mexican American Culture in the United State
Introduction:
Mexican Americans constitute the highest Latino subgroup found in the United States and it can be seen that the culture of these people was a mixture of Mexican and the American experiences. Outsiders might think of them in the form of food or music or holidays, but the culture consists of values, which go much deeper. To learn about the Mexican American culture, one needs to pay a keen attention to the sphere of family and belief system, that of education value, and their social tastes. Through these elements, the readers may come up with a renewed insight not limited to their assumptions.
Thesis:
The Mexican American culture reflects the significance of family and belief system, education resilience and social preferences that jointly influence identity, resilience and community lifestyle in the United States.
Topic Sentence/ Key Term 1: Family and Belief Systems
The Mexican American culture puts family first not only in the nuclear family but in the community consisting of grandparents, cousins and other family members who are all involved in the responsibility.
Evidence:
The Mexican American families highly regard familism, which states the importance of loyalty, respect, and collective responsibility (Tsai et al. 1241). Cultural festivals, such as the Dia de los Muertos and quinceaneras are strengthening both religious and family bonds and educating younger generations.
Analysis:
The emphasis on family and shared responsibility ensures that individuals feel a strong sense of belonging and support, even during times of hardship. Religious practices such as Catholicism provide moral guidance, while evolving generational practices blend traditional beliefs with modern influences. These dynamics show how family and belief systems preserve culture and adapt to new circumstances.
Transition to Topic 2:
Because family and belief systems place such importance on collective progress, it naturally connects to the way Mexican Americans approach education as a shared source of pride.
Topic Sentence/ Key Term 2: Educational Resilience
Education for Mexican Americans is often seen as a pathway to family pride and advancement rather than just an individual achievement.
Evidence:
Despite facing systemic barriers in U.S. schools, many Mexican American students persist, often balancing Spanish at home with English in school. Families use funds of knowledge passed down through experiences and traditions to encourage educational success (Kiyama 333).
Analysis:
The use of bilingual skills reflects both resilience and adaptability, as students must navigate two cultural worlds while meeting academic expectations. Parents and extended family often emphasize perseverance, which helps children overcome educational barriers. Education, therefore, becomes a reflection of cultural strength and resilience that ties back to family values.
Transition to Topic 3:
This education strength is also evident in the way Mexican Americans have been able to establish good social lives, where their traditions and meetings reinforce their sense of belonging and identity.
Topic Sentence/ Key Term 3: Social Preferences
The Mexican American social life is organized around meetings of the communities, as well as festivals and traditions that create a sense of cultural pride and bridge the generations.
Evidence:
Certain cultures like fiestas, cook outs, and music festivals allow the strengthening of cultural beliefs and the integrating outsiders, although insiders are also allowed to keep their traditions that are of particular significance to them. Food and music are symbols related to culture uniting people and revealing their heritage.
Analysis:
Social events have become the areas of cultural expression and reinforcement of the cultural values. They make a place where the younger generations are taught about traditions, as well as get a chance to adapt to a diverse society culturally. This homogeneity and customs fusion assists the society to stay alive and strong amidst the pressure of assimilation.
Transition to Conclusion:
The Mexican American culture is expressive of the resilience and adaptation as much as it is expressive of its tradition since family, education, and social preferences are very interconnected and are very closely tied to the customary origins of the Mexican American culture.
Conclusion Topic Sentence:
The Mexican American culture is stereotyping, it is a strong mixture of family values, educational power, and social traditions, which save identity and honor.
Summarizes the argument:
Mexican Americans teach how resilience is determined by the family and the belief systems, how education is turned into a collective pride, and how community events go to enforce satisfaction of belonging and identity.
What do you want the reader to think or do?
The readers must understand that reading about Mexican Americans culture, one cannot simplify it into food images or holiday images, but rather a complex system of value and practices that should be respected and comprehended.
Offer an emotional appeal/why is this important to you?:
This issue is important since a necessity to affirm the cultural customs is central in establishing inclusiveness and appreciation within the diverse society. These practices are also described as a heritage of Mexican Americans, as well as, sources of community empowerment and stability.
Work Cited
Kiyama, Judy M. "College Aspirations and Limitations." American Educational Research Journal, vol. 47, no. 2, 2010, pp. 330-356.
Tsai, Kim M., et al. "Parental Cultural Socialization of Mexican‐American Adolescents’ Family Obligation Values and Behaviors." Child Development, vol. 86, no. 4, 2015, pp. 1241-1252.