Why I should keep my Crows (crows＝the collar device for navy enlisted E-4 through E-6

 I recently made E-4 in the navy but my paper work is being withheld due to minor disciplinary infractions. I need a persuasive essay that goes over: why i want/need the rank up, the importance of leadership over navy and marine forces and how I plan to correct immature/irresponsible behavior in myself. If you need more information or to here from my own inspiration to succeed in my job as an IT in the navy don′t hesitate to ask.