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Foundations Discussion: Discovering Key Concepts in Scholarly Writing

INSTRUCTIONS: Respond to at least two of your colleagues’ posts and continue the Discussion by providing an example or personal experience that illustrates one of the points made by your colleague. Refer back to the “Purpose, Audience, and Evidence” media program to review the personal experience illustration to guide you. Further explain to your colleague this example from a personal experience perspective.

Lindsay S.

In scholarly writing, four key concepts— purpose, audience, presence of bias, and quality of evidence—are essential for producing clear, ethical, and impactful work. These concepts are especially important in the field of psychology, where research often influences real-world practices, policies, and mental health interventions. For this post, I will examine these concepts in relation to the article  “The Impact of Social Media on Adolescent Mental Health” by Rivera and Thompson (2021), which investigates how social media use correlates with anxiety and depression in teenagers.

Purpose: The purpose of Rivera and Thompson’s (2021) article is to explore the relationship between social media usage patterns and adolescent mental health outcomes. The authors aim to inform psychologists, educators, and parents about emerging mental health risks and to encourage the development of healthier online habits among youth. Establishing a clear purpose helps ensure the article is focused and relevant to the ongoing discourse in psychology.

Audience: The primary audience includes clinical psychologists, school counselors, researchers, and mental health policy makers. The article uses technical terms such as “cognitive-emotional regulation” and “longitudinal cohort analysis,” indicating it is written for an educated, professional readership. Understanding the audience shapes how information is presented, influencing tone, depth of analysis, and the inclusion of data.

Presence of Bias: Rivera and Thompson (2021) acknowledge possible bias in their study due to reliance on self-reported data from adolescents, which may be subject to exaggeration or minimization of symptoms. The authors attempt to mitigate this bias by triangulating self-reports with clinical assessments. Recognizing and addressing bias enhances transparency and strengthens the validity of psychological research.

Quality of Evidence: The article is grounded in high-quality evidence, including a large sample size (1,500 participants), longitudinal data collected over two years, and the use of validated psychological assessment tools. The authors also cite peer-reviewed studies and national statistics, ensuring their conclusions are based on reliable and current research.

These four concepts are foundational in psychological writing because they promote clarity, credibility, and ethical responsibility. For example, in a graduate course, I wrote a literature review on trauma-informed care. Initially, I did not consider how my bias toward certain interventions might skew my analysis. After receiving feedback, I revisited the literature, included opposing viewpoints, and critically evaluated all evidence. This improved the objectivity and depth of my work—highlighting the value of recognizing bias in psychological writing.

In summary, purpose, audience, bias, and evidence quality are not just academic concepts; they are the building blocks of trustworthy communication in psychology. They allow scholars and practitioners to share knowledge that can genuinely improve lives.

References

Rivera, L., & Thompson, J. (2021).  The impact of social media on adolescent mental healthJournal of Adolescent Psychology34(2), 123–139

Chantell S.

Hi Class,

Article: One size does not fit all: Identifying clusters of physical activity, screen time, and sleep behaviour co-development from childhood to adolescence.

This article focuses on a case study that sought to prove a normative relationship between physical activity, sleep behavior, and screen time and the development of the childhood to adolescence population. The case study aimed to identify clusters of patterns that indicated individuals with similar patterns would likely experience similar growth, and to apply intervention methods to individuals who followed different trajectories.

Post a description of the four key concepts (purpose, audience, presence of bias, and quality of evidence) of scholarly writing as they relate to the article you chose.

Purpose: To identify clusters of patterns and characterize them based on the impact of physical activity, screen time, and sleep behaviors on the development of individuals from childhood to adolescence. The study aimed to identify groups that shared the same clusters and compare them to groups with different cluster patterns, using the collected data to inform interventions related to youth health.

Presence of Bias: The leading sentence in the purpose statement appears to be leading by stating that “Canda was the first to adopt a comprehensive 24h movement guideline program” the authors go on to state that no other studies have investigated the concurrent development of these specific behaviors in youth which presents suggestion bias, however a similar article was written during the same timeframe for the scientific reports journal (Schmidt, Anedda, Burchatz, 2020). The question could also be asked of participants coming from the Match study versus random participants who fit the required categories, which could present sampling bias.

Quality of Evidence: The study included over 900 children and adolescents in a longitudinal design spanning a predetermined period to collect data on patterns of sleep behavior, screen time, and physical activity related to their development. The study employed a multi-trajectory analysis to identify individuals with similar clusters of behavior. According to the data results the study yielded the four different behavioral trajectories, Decliner (guideline adherence decrease participation over time), Complier (adhere to the guidelines throughout the study in all areas), Screen Complier (girls) (moderate screen time and moderate to low physical activity), MVPA Complier boys (low screen time and high physical activity).

  Further explain why you believe these concepts are important to writing and communication in the field of psychology. Include at least one example to illustrate one of the concepts.

According to the study notes on scholarly writing, these concepts are essential for keeping research papers on a defined, focused pathway. These concepts present data that is not compromised or biased by sampling selection. For example, suppose a researcher is looking to prove or disprove a specific hypothesis. In that case, the researcher might sample from a particular group if the researcher believed that participants from that group would produce data that supports the researcher's hypothesis. Ultimately, these concepts enhance the research, thereby strengthening its credibility.

Reference:

Walden University (2025). Document: Study Notes: Introduction to Scholarly Writing: Purpose, Audience, and Evidence (PDF)

Gallant, F., Thibault, V., Hebert, J., Gunnell, K. E., & Bélanger, M. (2020). One size does not fit all: Identifying clusters of physical activity, screen time, and sleep behaviour co-development from childhood to adolescenceLinks to an external site.. The International Journal of Behavioral Nutrition and Physical Activity, 17(58). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12966-020-00964-1

Schmidt, S.C.E., Anedda, B., Burchartz, A. (2020).  et al. Physical activity and screen time of children and adolescents before and during the COVID-19 lockdown in Germany: a natural experiment.  Sci Rep  10, 21780  https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-020-78438-4