TRANSFORMATIONAL LEADERSHIP edit!!!

THE ARE COMMENT WITH IN THE ATTACHMENT PLEASE MAKE EDITS ADD ONS AND ADJUSTMENTS ACCORDING TO COMMENTS. IN ADDITION PLEASE MAKE SURE THE FINAL PROJECT HAS THESE INSTRUCTIONS LISTED BELOW CHECKED OFF AS IMPLEMENTED IN THE ASSIGNMENT.

MUST MEET THE CRITERIA. 

Instructions:
    Do you have a title page?
    Are your Table of Contents properly hyperlinked?
    MUST use APA 6th edition formatting.
    Is the body of your paper at least 35 pages (track 1)?
    Are your references accurate according to APA standards?
    Did you provide appendices? If so, are they legible? 

Criteria 

Statement of the Problem | Fieldwork Experience Introduction :  

Exemplary | Exceeds Standards

Track  1:  The writer effectively and consistently focuses on a clearly  identified problem, purpose and topic throughout; effectively introduces  precise, knowledgeable claim(s); effectively establishes the  significance of the claim(s); effectively anticipates the audience’s  point of view: knowledge level, concerns, values, possible biases  relative to the claim.

Development | Substantiation | Task Alignment :  

Exemplary | Exceeds Standards

Track  1:  The writer develops and justifies claim(s) and counterclaim(s)  fairly, thoroughly and insightfully; supplies thorough and convincing  support/evidence: facts, extended definitions, concrete details,  quotations/other information, strong examples; effectively uses evidence  from sources that are smoothly integrated, comprehensive, relevant and  concrete.

Recommendations | Learning Outcomes:  

Exemplary | Exceeds Standards

Track  1:  the writer provides actionable, detailed, easy-to-follow  recommendations that are based on the research conducted in the project;  detailed implementation steps are provided for each recommendation;  recommendations are free from bias and use neutral language.

Writing Standards:  

Exemplary | Exceeds Standards

Grammar, spelling, structure, formatting, mechanics, and citations are accurate and free of error.