speech outline

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FEEDBACK FROM SPEECH

Leslie, please revisit the assignment prompt. This speech needs to be about a real-life experience that you had and what you learned from it.  The fable you retell should be about fictional characters who have experiences with a moral that matches the lesson you learned in real life.  Although you have used some beautiful imagery in this essay, the flow of speech is disjointed for public speaking when your audience will not have a copy of your speech outline. Your language is poetic, but for public speaking - this can cause your audience to be confused.  Please see my comments in the rubric's textboxes for specific feedback so that you can make changes before you deliver your speech for grade.  if you have questions, please let me know.