Speech Evaluation - I need it in 3 hours

Write a speech evaluation page and a half about:

My classmate presented a Music Speech in class about the song of

Kendrick Lamar- loyalty

Things my classmate did wrong:

1- He didn’t mentioned the resources in his speech 

2- he was very stressed

3- leaning on the table

4- he didn’t provide a transition

Good things my classmate did in his speech:

1- he talked about the singer background and about what he was before becoming an artist.

2- he was honest about his opinion.

3- He responded to all the questions that was provided in the speech outline criteria.

4- He maintained the time required for the speech which is minimum of 3 minutes.

5- He didn't use a note cards, he knew his topic very well.