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the submission focuses far too much on a      discussion about the pottery procedure and technique       -- although it does mention       black- and red-figure technique -- rather than analyzing specific objects in the Lowe and comparing them to pieces discussed in lecture and/or the textbook per the written directions uploaded into Blackboard and verbally discussed during administrative announcements in lecture                                       .     Also, the analysis extended into a discussion about Roman            art, which is beyond the scope of this assignment.