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Negative Impacts of Bullying in School
Grand Canyon University
UNV-104
Nurcan Ciftcikara
11/12/2023
Negative Impacts of Bullying in School
Bullying influences the entire school community. Children who bully others are also more likely to experience problems and be unhappy. Bullying can result from differences in color, sexual orientation, religion, ability or disability, weight, height, or anything else that divides children. Bullying is life-threatening and must be addressed immediately. It harms children's physical and mental health and academic achievement. Since bullying impacts society as a whole, we must have conversations with children to make sure they are not being bullied. This essay examines how bullying harms children. Bullying has several detrimental effects, such as affecting a child's physical and mental health and raising questions about their academic performance. Because bullying impacts society as a whole, it is imperative that we have conversations with children to make sure they are not being bullied.
According to studies, the majority of youngsters who bully others have grades ranging from D to F. Many parents are unaware that bullying can have a negative impact not only on a child's confidence and self-esteem but also on his academic achievement. Research by Buhs et al. (2020), Cole et al. (2019), Konishi et al. (2020), and Niemelä et al. (2021) consistently links bully victimization to lower academic achievement. According to these studies, bullying may reduce academic performance beyond emotional repercussions. Implementing effective prevention and intervention techniques requires understanding how these variables are interrelated. An interpersonal risk model is supported by longitudinal studies like McDougall and Vaillancourt (2020) and Vaillancourt et al. (2020), which show that youth who experience chronic victimization have worse academic trajectories, mental health issues, and substance use. This supports the idea that addressing bullying is vital for both emotional well-being and learning environments. As parents and educators struggle with bullying, recognizing its subtle impact on academic achievement is crucial to adopting comprehensive and educated methods to promote a safe and supportive educational environment for all students.
The impact of bullying on someone's psychological well-being can be long-lasting. According to studies, children who experience bullying are more likely to experience psychological problems as adults, including depression, low self-esteem, and a higher risk of suicide. Research by Gini and Pozzoli (2019), Moore et al. (2020), and Reijntjes et al. (2020) found that bullying victims often have depression symptoms and physical health issues such as stomachaches, headaches, and sleeping problems. These sequelae, often co-occurring, show how widespread and devastating bullying is to mental health. Furthermore, research studies by Irwin et al. (2019), Strm et al. (2020), and Troop-Gordon and Ladd (2020) found that negative self- and other-related cognitions, such as shame and self-disparagement and hostile intent attributions toward others can mediate the link between peer victimization and depression symptoms. Understanding these complex relationships is essential for developing effective bullying intervention programs that address the many psychological effects of bullying. Educators, parents, and policymakers must recognize the long-term psychological effects of bullying to create a supportive environment that promotes the mental health and resilience of all children and creates a healthier, more compassionate society.
Physical bullying, the most overt manifestation of this pervasive issue, stands as a menacing threat to the well-being of targeted children. The targeted child feels threatened when a child with more power physically harms another child to gain more control. Peer victimization in schools is a significant issue in many countries, with at least 8% of girls and 12% of boys having been physically attacked, shamed, ridiculed, or otherwise harassed by their peers at least once in the previous few months (Chester et al., 2019). Victims' physical health is affected by physical bullying. Additionally, Brendgen et al. (2020) and Takizawa et al. (2020) found that peer victimization increases circulating inflammatory proteins and alters the hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal (HPA) axis. These physiological changes have been linked to both physical health issues and depressive symptoms, as evidenced by research from Knack et al. (2021), Billet-doux et al. (2021), and Zalli et al. (2020). It is imperative to address physical bullying as a type of victimization due to the intricate relationship between the behavior and the body. To create a secure and loving environment for all children, society must recognize the physical toll of bullying. Exploring physical bullying and its physiological effects helps us develop focused solutions to protect victims from this overt kind of aggression.
In conclusion, bullying, with its far-reaching consequences on a child's physical and mental health, as well as its implications for academic performance, demands urgent attention. Bullying during childhood has a severe negative impact on children's short- and long-term health.. Beyond immediate emotional discomfort, the effects can endure into adulthood and impair physical and mental health. This persistent issue affects academic achievement, psychological health, and physical fitness, emphasizing the need to address it to ensure every child's well-being. Mitigating the adverse effects of childhood bullying necessitates a dual approach of long-term follow-up and immediate intervention. Communities, families, and schools must work together to understand bullying and its long-term effects. District and school bullying prevention strategies are crucial to preventing academic, mental, and physical health difficulties. By fighting bullying together, we build environments that prioritize every child's well-being and prevent intellectual, mental, and physical problems.
References
Brendgen, M., Poulin, F., & Denault, A.-S. (2019). Peer Victimization in School and Mental and Physical Health Problems in Young Adulthood: Examining the Role of Revictimization at the Workplace. Developmental Psychology, 55(10), 2219–2230. Retrieved from https://search-ebscohostcom.lopes.idm.oclc.org/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ1229941&site=eds-live&scope=site
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Topic 5: First Draft Self-Evaluation and Reflection
Part 1: Revising and Editing
Directions:
1. Go through each section below and self-evaluate your first draft by checking if you did or did not complete the task. You do not need instructor feedback from your first draft to complete this worksheet.
2. If you did not complete the task, give a brief explanation of why.
Revising and Editing Overall Tips
· Is your paper double spaced?
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· Have you printed out a copy to read over?
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· Did you visually scan your paper for paragraph length? Paragraphs that are either too long or shorter than the others may need some revision.
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· Have you read your paper aloud to catch errors?
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· Have you given your paper to a friend/instructor/CLA tutor to review?
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Revising
· Did you reread the assignment details?
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· Now that you have a draft, is your thesis statement clear, limited, and interesting, and is it supported in your draft?
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· Does your thesis statement contain a main point and three subtopics?
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· Are all your sources cited correctly? Does each parenthetical citation have a matching entry on the Reference page?
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· Does every entry on the Reference page have matching parenthetical references?
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· Review your introduction. Do you have a strong hook that engages the reader?
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· Review the conclusion. Does it sum up your main points and restate the thesis?
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Paragraph Revisions
· Does each paragraph have a strong topic sentence?
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· Do all sentences support the topic sentence?
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· Is the paragraph organized logically?
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· Do the sentences transition smoothly and logically?
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· Is each paragraph supported with sufficient details, examples, statistics, facts, research?
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Editing
· Did you correct suggestions made by your word processing program’s spell check and grammar check?
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· What errors have teachers most corrected on your past papers? Did you check for those same errors on this paper?
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Did you check for some of the most common errors in your paper? Answer Yes or No:
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Are there any words that you use repeatedly in your paper?
Consider word choice. Can you identify any sentences/phrases which are awkward and need to be rephrased?
Could your sentence structure use more variety?
Part 2: Strengths and Weaknesses
Directions: Go through each component description below. Then give a brief explanation of what you did well, what you can improve upon, and your reasoning why – all boxes must be complete.
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Sentence/Paragraph Fluency: There is a smooth transitioning between paragraphs; sentences within the body paragraphs flow and are easy to read and follow; there is an unison of the topic chosen and the arguments presented in the essay; research enhances the paragraphs, and does not take the majority of the paragraph itself-again, research is to support, not create the essay. |
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Part 3: Summary and Reflection
Directions: Please write a summary based on the guidelines given below; write your summary in the space provided.
In 250-300 words answer the following:
· After reviewing your strengths and weaknesses, what will you do the same and what will you do differently when completing your next college essay?
· What are some resources that you can use to help improve your areas of weakness?
· What advice would you give a new student to help with writing their first college essay?
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