revising work and presentation of it

please revise the attached tesla company document based on followings;

 Don't need Research andDevelopment unless it is significant to marketing. Find a relevant examples for marketing. Don't care about production unless it is significant to marketing. Add some relevant examples how it can affect to marketing. Need to hear about the 4 P's (you already have the Product section).product, price, place, and promotion. Go big on Promotion and media plan and sample advertisements. New and follow-on products a brief mention only. Focus on the here and now. 

Once you revised please create a power point presentation based on attached guidelines.