REVISED PAPER

i uploaded two files one is the the paper that need to be revised and the second is the assignment and the instructions. so you can know what is the paper about and what you need to do.  i need the paper in 8 hours !!! i already wrote the paper i just need it to be revised and fix grammar error or check if i did something wrong and fix it.  There is two different subject in the word document each needs to be 200 words so total 400 but THEY ARE BOTH DIFFERENT SUBJECT!!! the first subject i need it to be revised. the second one i need it to be revised and add more stuff to it. the instruction paper explains everything with the question that the paper needs to answer