Revised and Proofreading WK7 Discussion
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Revision and Proofreading
Take a paragraph or more from one of your previous assignments and revise it. Copy the original passage into your post and then write a new passage in which you modify for style, diction, order, and logic. In your responses, comment on the effectiveness of the revised passages (Are they more logical and clearer? Do they flow better?) and/or suggest alternate ways to revise each passage.
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