Revise the Essay 3

I have an essay to revise - Essay 3. I got 123 out of 150. I have uploaded 

1. Essay2, 

2. Essay 3, and 

3. 1302. Review of Essay 2 before you integrate info for Essay 3_2

Some feedback I got back from my instructor to fix:

· Use original title, not the name of assignment or reading.

· Use the author's full name for the first time the name is mentioned. After that, refer to author by last name only.

· ineffective word choice

· ...who [is] constantly trying...

· Research, whether it involves the story, historical references, biographical information should be cited in the body of the text and a citation entry should appear in Works Cited.