Revise paper

Choose to revise, to identify and repair other errors. This paper will be improved by two main revisions: 1) adding info from more than one source to each body paragraph and 2) proofreading for errors. I've noted errors in the first few paragraphs. Make the paper more academic. Any grimmer, word choose, and statement  errors. This paper is talk about the problem about the beauty stander, and how to solve the problems.