revise essay -zhong

The requirement for essay link:

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS_LvgiofbRANzOKlmXDInikUp3tSp3ezE-iqho7D0QWDza7FwE49244i9q3HizC_myRJ9r6nu0udAJ/pub 

should watch  ted talk link as below:

https://www.ted.com/talks/adam_alter_why_our_screens_make_us_less_happy

https://www.ted.com/talks/tim_urban_inside_the_mind_of_a_master_procrastinator/transcript

https://medium.com/the-mission/the-30-point-checklist-to-accelerate-your-learning-ee9695bd8bd0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=04kcpVjw89c

https://www.ted.com/talks/srikumar_rao_plug_into_your_hard_wired_happiness

https://www.scotthyoung.com/blog/2019/09/17/explore-exploit/

total 4 pages to revise.