revise

 Need previouse self analysis revised need it to be better this is my final one. I attached the previous self analysis and also one of the comments that was left on it that needed to be inputed.

How is this a personal problem for you? Please connect more of a personal response in your self-analysis. You need to provide a detailed connection between your personal response and the course content/literature/theories. 

Edit before you submit to avoid writing errors.