Research Paper- Final Tech Step 2-3

Step 2 out of 3 . IND Description and problem statement

  For detailed instructions, please see your Research Paper Guidelines, Step 2. 

Please follow criteria 

I have added the paper I did but this is the comment the professer left . I need it it fixed to her wants. 

 Hi XXXXX, Your plagiarism score is 68%. I doubled checked the report, and indeed 68% of your submission is copied and pasted. I do not think you meant to plagiarize, as I see your citations. Nevertheless, you cannot copy and paste others' words and ideas. Having done that, you imply that you have paraphrased. In the next iteration of your paper, you must prove that you are able to integrate the ideas of others into your own composition. 

 Hi XXXX, You may revise this section of the paper when you submit it along with the solutions part of the paper, which is your next and last research assignment (Part 3). Compose it by weaving the data you find into the first half of the paper. Don't copy and paste anything.