Research paper 5 pages - due in 30 hours

This paper needs to be a minimum of 5 pages long (not including the works cited page).. the content should end at the BOTTOM of the 5 pages..

It is on Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe

The annotated bib, thesis and outline, and feedback is attached.. 

/Feedback for annotated bib: 70/100

 None of your annotations make much sense, nor do they prove that you have read the articles, because the annotations are so vague and tend to repeat themselves.  Also, some of your entries are missing info, and others are not in the most recent version of MLA.   

Feedback for thesis and outline: 35/50

 You have one point in your thesis that can't be proven, but that point in the thesis also doesn't have a matching point on the outline.  Also, I'm not sure what that ¶ at the end is.  

MUST BE IN MLA