research paper

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1. first edit the title " he said there is something missing after " metalinguistics" so do it. rewrite the title in a better and clear way, and make sure that no one did it before

2. in the introduction, the first 4 lines have no reference, add one to it

3. Explain what does the CDA of ..... the rest of the title of the research means in the introduction part

4. in the literature review, " WHERE IS YOUR VOICE" you talked about what others did but didn't say your opinion or what you gonna do. " the voice of the author " 

5. research questions, change them, or edit them in a better way and more clearly he didn't like them too much and he said " how can you measure them?

6. purpose statement, is kinda short but good, try to edit it better 

7. add the rest of the research parts as you know " see the following attached " 

8. NUMBER OF PAGES 12 " NOT INCLUDING TITLE AND REF PAGES "