re-write the paragraph and organise it

I have write some note about marketing. so I need you to re-write them in academic language and add references them  to support them. 

the most important is that ,,, i need it to be related to each other. for example,  the part of companies and charity and universities, how they will help to improve my product "spray ante-biotic for implement hip devices". 

so please ask me if you do not understand what i mean.