POS2112 case study paper- help fixing rough draft

In-depth profile of one particular state or local government’s attempt at addressing human trafficking, you’ll need to identify some political problem that state or local governments are dealing with through public policy, conduct research into that topic, and write a 1500-2500 word (roughly six-ten pages) paper about it.

Need help fixing my rough draft and turning it into the final paper. Attached is the paper.