Wrongful Essay

 You needed to cite at least four sources for this essay; your essay cites two sources.  

MLA document format: Write the date like this: 7 April 2021  MLA in-text citation format: Italicize the title of a newspaper, book, magazine, journal, or film. The book is a memoir. A quote should not be set as block quotes or placed on new lines of text, unless the quote is four or more complete lines long; otherwise, the quote should be integrated in a paragraph.

 The in-text citation for the book should look like this: (Thompson-Cannino, et al. 65). Introduce each source the first time you use it by introducing where it was published, such as the name of a website, or by introducing the credentials of the author. When including the title of an article or web page in an in-text citation, include the first two-three words of the title in quotes and in parentheses. Put a comma before et al.  

Works Cited page: Incorrect MLA Works Cited page formatting. See the OWL Purdue MLA website's Sample MLA Paper. You needed at least four source entries on this page. The title of the page is Works Cited. 

 Content: The introduction is attention-grabbing, and the thesis statement is an opinionated main point for the essay. Each body paragraph needs to begin with an opinionated main point with no research. Each body paragraph needed to include at least one cited quote and at least one cited paraphrase. You needed a rebuttal paragraph after the counterargument section and before the conclusion paragraph. The conclusion should be brief; it should stress the thesis without directly repeating it, and it should include a final cited quote or cited paraphrase.