philosophy edit

1-first of all its a belief paper so , you need to show what you believe in and not compare between two arguments . you can state that I am with free will and can use Narian's arguments as support. 

2-when you state my belief it has to be in primes conclusion format, please check how a primes conclusion format is constructed. 

3-in the second paper you talked about ( free will vs free choice) please expand more and define his view

4- in part 3 i edited most of what you did , please check it out and expand more you can also give examples of fallacies of my own, like the last paragraph of part two y we can see an appeal to emotion