persuasive essay

in the persuasive essay, it has to connect the argument to my previous assignment (exploratory essay). below has attached the prompt for persuasive essay and the rough draft of the persuasive essay. and it  also attached the previous assignment (exploratory essay). The purpose in the research paper was to develop and demonstrate your research skills and awareness of the complexity of your chosen research topic, your purpose for this assignment is to present an argument and convince readers about how to best address a key problem you identified in your research.