Paragraph Revision

 

By now you have received feedback on your Paper 1 plan and should be getting ready to begin your Paper 1 Introduction/Methods Draft, or already started. For this assignment you will apply concepts from Module 5 Part 2 (paragraph structure) to revise at least two paragraphs from your Introduction.

1. Start by writing out your Introduction using your Paper 1 Planning Document.
2. Then, select two paragraphs that you could improve (note: all paragraphs can be improved so this step is up to you!). You should turn in both a copy of your original paragraphs as well as the revised version of your paragraphs.
3. Lastly, include 2-3 sentences describing what you have changed and how you think it will help the overall "flow", structure, or clarity of your Introduction.