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Here is the feedback I got it. So please revise. Thank you!

1. What are some local errors to be fixed? There were no local errors in this paper. The words were spelled correctly. The person who wrote this even used some words that really caught my attention.
2. What are some global errors to be addressed? The only global errors that the writer of this paper had were the page numbers. As I read the paper I noticed that they had a sentence before some page numbers but not quotation marks. I wasn't sure if they were citations or not.
3. In your opinion, what are the biggest strengths of this paper? In my opinion, the biggest strengths of this paper are the understandable paragraphs. This writer knew exactly what he was talking about in their paper. They wrote the paper very professional and detailed.
4. What is your overall opinion of this paper?My overall opinion of this paper is awesome! Just like the previous paper that I had read, this paper was very impressive.