need a paper revised grammer and points supported (Organizational Behavior)

paper is attached I need grammer fixed and details better supported I will add below the notes my professor left so you can see what needs to be fixed

1.Answers are not comprehensive or completely stated. Key points are addressed, but not well supported.

2.Displays over five errors in spelling, punctuation, grammar, sentence structure, and APA style.

(12.5 points)