Mod 8 Discussion

Sum up the major argument that you created in Paper 1. Submit one  paragraph of at least 150 words from Paper 1 that integrates the secondary source you found--as it it would appear in a revision of the paper to further support  or illustrate the topic at hand. Also, provide a works-cited listing of the source as it will appear on the works-cited page.  Critique two peers' posts: How well is the source integrated? Is anything to be edited to ensure a good flow between the writer’s own statements and the quotation? If the source is summarized or paraphrased, is it clear where exactly the writer starts using it?