MANUSCRIPT -REVIEW LOU

 This assignment is a part 2 of a previous one completed. I have uploaded my assignment PART 1completed, the assignment was reviewed by my instructor and she add some comments that must be added or fixed for this PART 2. THE BLUE BOX must be double click to read what she wrote there to update.

 I need update that according to her comment and wide a little more SECTION 4 AND SECTION 5. 

ALSO I NEED TO WIDE MY REFERENCES it is required at least 20 scholarly resources, NO OLDER THAN 5 YEARS AND CHECK THAT PROFESSOR AS WELL REQUIRE APPENDIX.