I am needing this paper to be edited for the following. - Reword the poor reading of the thesis to state the overall purpose of the essay on the character of my grandmother and the influence she had on my life. - Correct topic sentence of paragraph three

I am needing this paper to be edited for the following. - Reword the poor reading of the thesis to state the overall purpose of the essay on the character of my grandmother and the influence she had on my life. - Correct topic sentence of paragraph three to better suit the information of the paragraph. In paragraph three us a transitional word to begin the topic sentence. - Check all fluency of the essay, punctuation and grammar of the four-page essay.