hook

https://youtu.be/JjtuBcJUsjY   One Child Policy

Choose one of INTRO (HOOK) and then pop in the thesis statement

•  Questions
• Story
• Comparison
• Imaginary story
• Quotation

Main Idea (Thesis) There are several reasons why the One Child Policy in China is detrimental to woman.

Transitional Expression  First

Support Point 1            Forced abortion

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Transitional Expression     Second

Support Point 1                Over population

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Transitional Expression     Last

Support Point 1               Violence against women

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Choose one of the CONCLUDING Paragraph to complete the DRAFT ESSAY

• Giving advise
• making a prediction
• ending with thought provoking questions
• making a personal growth statement
• finishing a story that you used in the introduction