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Whatmakesagoodpieceofwriting2.docx
What makes a good piece of writing?
In order to have a clear purpose, here's what you must do when you write:
1. Description – you need to be specific about everything you write.
Don't just write something like "that test was hard". As your instructor (and your main audience), I have no idea what that means.
You need to be more specific because my definition of what makes a test hard or difficult may be very different from yours. So here's an example on how to make that idea more descriptive:
The three pages of math problems and extra credit equations make this test the most difficult to figure.
Now, why does this work better?
You have written more detail I can output the tests in context. As your audience, I now understand the type of test you're discussing and what exactly is required.
The key to good narration and description in any piece of writing is not just tell your audience about something that shows them through solid detail.
2. Specific examples – for this course many of your specific descriptions will come from the stories that I sign you to read. Your essay topic will be based on these readings and the specific descriptions you will use comp from direct quotes. (see the notes on the parts of the essay for specific information on the subject).
Each example needs to be
Appropriate (directly related to the subject)
Accurate
Convincing (easy to relate to)
3.. Analysis-this is where your opinions come into play. While in this course I do not allow you to use I or you, the way you write your analysis tells me that that's your opinion. It's an idea that you're helping to prove with the support of your specific examples.
The reason that analysis is so important when writing about literature is because stories written by other people often deal with the abstract concepts, love or loss. The reason that topics like this are abstract is because they have different definitions for every member of your audience.
This is why analysis is so important because without it your audience has no clue what your main idea (or thesis) is about. Remember, writing for college class is very different than writing you may have done before. You are not writing a plot summary of the stories you read. Don't tell your audience what happened, but why what happened matters.
The why is your analysis is so important.
For instance, if I was writing an essay about the use of food in the fantasy novel the hobbit, here's an example of what a sentence of my analysis may look like:
The amount of time that all of the hobbit spent talking about food shows that fellowship around the table is a key part of any journey.
How's this analysis?
I'm presenting a point about the story that you may not agree with because it's not a statement of fact or an element of the plot. It's my opinion about what the use of food in the story means. This makes this statement and instance of analysis.
Remember, you can never have analysis without a quote from the story to help prove your point. Here's what that would look like:
The amount of time that all of the hobbit spent talking about food shows that fellowship around the table is a key part of any journey.
Each hobbit understands how important eating together has become because "they must eat before moving on each day" (Smith 46 )
*notice that our commentary from before is immediately backed up with a direct quote from the story. The quote I used in my example is also introduced and cited (which is the concept you'll learn about later on in semester).
Remember, writing for college class is very different than writing you may have done before. You are not writing a plot summary of the stories you read. Don't tell your audience what happened, but why what happened matters…..
Week1engl.docx
Week 1"Hunger"as a theme
For this assignment you will need to read " Hunger" from Back to the Lake (starting on p. 141 ). After you have read the story, respond to the following question You can either respond in paragraph form or answer the questions individually.
Topic: How does the author effectively describe her "hunger"?-- use this topic...not one from the book. Here is link to the story:
Blue-Collar BrillianceLinks to an external site.
You need to have an introduced and cited quote in each paragraph. However, you do not have to do a works cited page
Introducing and Integrating Quotations--- You must do this with each quote
Week 1: Writing Assignment 1
Details
For this assignment you must write three paragraphs. You can not use First person (I, me) or second person (you, we, or us):
Use the links provided in the overview/notes this week to get the transcript to quote from:
https://www.americanrhetoric.com/MovieSpeeches/moviespeechtokillamockingbird.html
1. Describe the speaker's use of logos
2. Describe the speaker's use of pathos
3. Describe the speaker's use of ethos
Remember do not just go through the content point by point. I do not want you to simply retell what was said. Why did they ask Wiesel to speak? What was the significance of the speech?
Each paragraph must be 5-8 length. You must have at least one quote that is introduced and cited correctly. I am not requiring that you provide a works cited page for this assignment. 500 words minimum.
You must cite and introduce one quote per paragraph
You do not have to include a works cited page.
If you do not make the length for these , you will not pass. You will also not pass the assignment if you do not have the required number of quotes. I will also grade for run-ons and fragments.
You may need to revisit last weeks' module to view the speech again. Here is the text of speech:
This link has a copy of the speech transcript:
Transcript and video of speech:
video transcript:
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Citations should be the last name of the author followed by page number: (Jones 48). If no page number was included in the source, then just the last name is sufficient.
NOTE: You cannot use the author's name in the quote introduction if it is the only element to put in the citation
For example:
It is clear that he is a key part of the show:” I’m the host, yes. And I write all the music, and I write all the scripts”
(Rogers).
If you do have a page number, then you can use the author's name in the citation:
Mr. Rogers uses logos in a manner which justifies his request for better funding. Rogers presents one example of his predicament with reasonable tone: “It may sound like quite a difference, but $6,000 pays for less than two minutes of cartoons" (4).
If you do not make the length for these , you will not pass. You will also not pass the assignment if you do not have the required number of quotes. I will also grade for run-ons and fragments.
notesonlogic.docx
Pathos, Logos, and Ethos
Most people are able to drive a car without fully understanding how the car operates. Making an argument is the same way. Most of us attempt to persuade people every day without understanding how persuasion works. Learning how a strong argument is crafted empowers us to better communicate and persuade others to understand our viewpoints.
What Are Pathos, Logos, and Ethos?
Ethos, Pathos, and Logos are three strategies commonly employed when attempting to persuade a reader.
Pathos, or the appeal to emotion, means to persuade an audience by purposely evoking certain emotions to make them feel the way the author wants them to feel. Authors make deliberate word choices, use meaningful language, and use examples and stories that evoke emotion. Authors can desire a range of emotional responses, including sympathy, anger, frustration, or even amusement.
Logos, or the appeal to logic, means to appeal to the audiences’ sense of reason or logic. To use logos, the author makes clear, logical connections between ideas, and includes the use of facts and statistics. Using historical and literal analogies to make a logical argument is another strategy. There should be no holes in the argument, also known as logical fallacies, which are unclear or wrong assumptions or connections between ideas.
Ethos is used to convey the writer’s credibility and authority. When evaluating a piece of writing, the reader must know if the writer is qualified to comment on this issue. The writer can communicate their authority by using credible sources; choosing appropriate language; demonstrating that they have fairly examined the issue (by considering the counterargument); introducing their own professional, academic or authorial credentials; introducing their own personal experience with the issue; and using correct grammar and syntax.
Sample Paragraph
Imagine this: a small dog sits in a dark, cold garage. His hair is matted and dirty; he is skinny and weak from going days without food. There is no water for him to drink, no person to give him love and no blanket to keep him warm at night.1 While this might be a hard scenario to imagine, it is not an uncommon one in America today. According to the Humane Society of the United States, nearly 1,000,000 animals are abused or die from abuse every year.2 As a veterinarian with 30 years of experience, I have seen how even one incident of abuse can affect an animal for the rest of its life.3 As a society, we need to be more aware of this terrible problem and address this issue before it gets worse.
1Pathos: the author paints a vivid picture to evoke a feeling from the reader—sadness and pity for the abused animal.
2Logos: the author uses a startling statistic to appeal to our intellect. Keep in mind that these three strategies can often overlap. This sentence qualifies as both Logos and Ethos because it cites a reputable organization, so we know the author is using credible sources.
3Ethos: the author establishes their own credibility by stating their occupation and experience.>
How Do I Know if the Author is Using Pathos, Logos or Ethos?
Pathos—does the writer appeal to the emotions of their reader?
Do they use individuals’ stories to “put a face” on the problem you’re exploring? For example, using an individual’s story about losing their home during the mortgage crisis of the 2008 Recession may be more powerful than using only statistics.
Do they use charged language or words that carry appropriate connotations? For example, if a writer describes a gun as a “sleek, silver piece of sophisticated weaponry,” they are delivering a much different image than if she writes, “a cold hunk of metal, dark and barbaric and ready to kill.”
Logos—does the writer appeal to the rational mind by using logic and evidence?
Do they include facts and statistics that support their point? It’s more convincing to tell the reader that “80% of students have committed some form of plagiarism,” than simply saying that “Lots of students have plagiarized.”
Do they walk us through the logical quality of their argument? Do they show us how ideas connect in a rational way? For example: “English students have been able to raise their overall grade by meeting with peer tutors, so it’s safe to assume that math students could also benefit from frequent tutoring sessions.” This example points out that logically, if the result has been seen in one situation, then it should be seen in a different but similar situation.
Do they avoid logical fallacies? A few examples of these are:
Hasty generalizations: “Even though the movie just started, I know it’s going to be boring.”
Slippery Slope: “If the government legalizes marijuana, eventually they’ll legalize all drugs.”
Circular Argument: “Barack Obama is a good communicator because he speaks effectively.”
Ethos—is this writer trustworthy?
What are their credentials? Are they an expert in the field? Have they written past essays, articles or books about this topic?
Do they use reputable sources? Do they support her statements with sources from established publications like The New York Times or a government census report? Do they fail to mention any sources?
Are they a fair-minded person who has considered all sides of this issue? Have they acknowledged any common ground they share with the opposite side? Do they include a counterargument and refutation?
Learn more about the Rhetorical Analysis Graphic Organizer.
Learn more about the Rhetorical Analysis Sample Essay.
readingcritically-16-11.pptx
What makes a good piece of writing?
Why are you doing it?
The main purpose of any piece of writing is to prove a point..
You're not trying to convince your audience to agree with you
Every piece of writing has two levels
“ The surface”
“Deep level”
Plot or a “step by step”
Retelling of the story(also called plot summary)
This does not belong in your writing for a college class
The things that you will explore in your writing are what is “underneath” the plot itself.
The elements in this level can mean something different to every writer and answer the question: why did the writer bother to write it?
Words can have a double meaning:
Denotation
Connotation
Denotation is the strict
dictionary meaning of a word.
Connotation is the emotional and
imaginative association surrounding a word.
So what?
Reading for this course is going to be more challenging then you have done before. During the semester, always keep this in mind:
What is the significance? or as I call it ... "the SO WHAT" question
Define it!
the quality of being worthy of attention; importance; the meaning to be found in words or events.
This definition is so important because it prevents you from falling into a common trap in this course. You can not just restate the plot. You must explain why the story matters/has an impact
No room for plot!
Here is an example of plot summary:
The poem is clearly powerful and tells the story of true love. Great...but so what? What is the significance?
Here is an example of answering "the so what question
"The poem is still popular because it speaks to the dedication and sacrifice of true love.
Writers/readers need to think about the denotation
of a word – its dictionary meaning
and the connotation – the implied
meanings and associations when
choosing words.
Good writers choose their words for
the effects they have upon their
readers. Word choice is also a clue to
the writer’s attitude toward his/her
subject – tone.
Denotation
House: A building in which someone lives (neutral)
Connotation
Home: A place of warmth, comfort and (positive)
affection
Shanty: A small, crudely built shack. (negative)
You also need to be on the lookout for…
Themes:
Symbols :
The underlying meaning of a story
Some of the most common themes are love, family, death, or hero's journey
An object, person, situation, or action which has a literal meaning but another meaning as well.
An example of a symbol. Sauron's eye in the Lord of the Rings represents Sauron himself, along with evil as the "eye" is encased in fire and is red.
Remember……
Reading beyond the plot (surface level) is not easy. It takes practice and requires that you read the same story more than once.
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