help with assgn due in 24 hours

REVISION - Cause-Effect Paragraph

For this assignment, you are to make  revisions to the paragraph you submitted for Week 8 based upon the comments I have provided to you.  Note that you must make  ALL REVISIONS in order to receive credit.   

As always, please feel free to reach out to me should you have any questions.  Also, be sure to EMAIL me if you run into any trouble.

FEEDBACK:

For the revision that is due this Friday, please submit an original paragraph that is 100% AI-free as the revision is worth 100 points not just 20 points like this draft.  

PARAGRAPH WRITTEN:

Technology has changed the way people connect, both helping and hurting personal relationships. , it allows people to communicate video calls, and social media, making it easier to stay in touch.  families who live far  can still feel close by sharing messages and updates online. It also helps people form new friendships and relationships through dating apps and online communities.technology can sometimes create distance instead of closeness. Many people spend too much time on their phones instead of engaging in real conversations, which can weaken their personal connections. Social media can also cause problems by making relationships seem perfect when they are not , leading to insecurity. While technology is a powerful tool for communication, it’s important to use it wisely to maintain strong and healthy relationships.

ACTUAL ASSIGNMENT INSTRUCTIONS:

Cause and Effect Writing Assignment topic  

How has technology helped or hindered personal relationships?  Explain some causes and or effects. For example, the cellphone, computer, and other devices that you can think of.

Write a paragraph of 6 to 12 sentences.  Include a topic sentence( your thesis sentence), at least 2 examples of support, and a closing sentence.

Do not use 2nd person pronouns (you, your); do not use contractions (can’t, don’t)

Please make sure to watch my LECTURE on topic sentences as paragraphs MUST have an accurate topic sentence with this submission.

In the heading of your paper include your name, date, course, and title of assignment to the left of your margin. Type your assignment in a Word document. Save your file and submit as an attachment file.

NOTE:  You  MUST use the topic above.  Failure to use the above topic will result in no credit.

REVISION - Cause-Effect Paragraph

For this assignment, you are to make  revisions to the paragraph you submitted for Week 8 based upon the comments I have provided to you.  Note that you must make  ALL REVISIONS in order to receive credit.   

As always, please feel free to reach out to me should you have any questions.  Also, be sure to EMAIL me if you run into any trouble.

FEEDBACK:

For the revision that is due this Friday, please submit an original paragraph that is 100% AI-free as the revision is worth 100 points not just 20 points like this draft.  

PARAGRAPH WRITTEN:

Technology has changed the way people connect, both helping and hurting personal relationships. , it allows people to communicate video calls, and social media, making it easier to stay in touch.  families who live far  can still feel close by sharing messages and updates online. It also helps people form new friendships and relationships through dating apps and online communities.technology can sometimes create distance instead of closeness. Many people spend too much time on their phones instead of engaging in real conversations, which can weaken their personal connections. Social media can also cause problems by making relationships seem perfect when they are not , leading to insecurity. While technology is a powerful tool for communication, it’s important to use it wisely to maintain strong and healthy relationships.

ACTUAL ASSIGNMENT INSTRUCTIONS:

Cause and Effect Writing Assignment topic  

How has technology helped or hindered personal relationships?  Explain some causes and or effects. For example, the cellphone, computer, and other devices that you can think of.

Write a paragraph of 6 to 12 sentences.  Include a topic sentence( your thesis sentence), at least 2 examples of support, and a closing sentence.

Do not use 2nd person pronouns (you, your); do not use contractions (can’t, don’t)

Please make sure to watch my LECTURE on topic sentences as paragraphs MUST have an accurate topic sentence with this submission.

In the heading of your paper include your name, date, course, and title of assignment to the left of your margin. Type your assignment in a Word document. Save your file and submit as an attachment file.

NOTE:  You  MUST use the topic above.  Failure to use the above topic will result in no credit.