Finalize the final paper with what is listed below

This paper need to be 2000-2700 words I think it is at 1600+ right now. This paper need a timeline, Strategic Plan Objective for the Facility and management and

Barriers and resources needed to change cultural diversity. Please put these in the paper where needed and feel free anything that will help this paper. I have uploaded my original paper and the paper that my classmate see wrong with it. Please feel free to add whatever needed to make a A on this paper it is worth 300 pts.