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Feedback Stage Instructions: 

· Read the written evaluations you have received from your peers, rate them as to how critical and motivational they were, and leave a comment to let them know if their evaluation was helpful to you or not, and why or why not.

I would like to start by saying that I enjoyed reading your post. It well-evidenced the dedication you put into it. The first thing that caught my attention was your introductory statement. Although it was not required in the instructions, it set the mood and allowed the reader to get into perspective about the topic of the discussion, which is appreciated. I value how you responded to all questions thoroughly without sounding redundant. You adhered to and focused solely on the main points, providing a clear message. As a future reference, I would suggest proofreading a bit more. For instance, in the second paragraph, in the second sentence, you wrote, “thus he showing me.” I believe you meant to write, “thus showing me.” Additionally, some phrases could have been synthesized more to avoid wordiness. Examples include replacing “I came to the conclusion” with “I concluded” and “I usually respond in a defensive way” with “I usually respond defensively.” I want to emphasize that what you wrote is good. I am just adding suggestions so you can achieve a more concise vocabulary and, thus, enhance quality. Overall, I think you did a fantastic job. Keep up the great work!

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Motivational

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Critical

How helpful was the critique you received in the written evaluation?

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