essay comparison of personal essay

hi this is an extended question of one of the paper that I had written on the short story Reunion by John Cheever previously

I have attached 3 things below 

1. my personal essay 

DIRECT LINKS TO 

2. link to short story- https://genius.com/John-cheever-reunion-annotated

3.link to the essay that needs to be compared- http://sittingbee.com/reunion-john-cheever/

pleas write to me if any questions