Environment Paper

I have a rough draft that I need edited. Some of it doesn't make sense and some of it is just bad grammar. This is what they are looking for in this paper:

*Major issues were clearly stated, unbiased, and in question form. Facts, not opinions are listed. Relevant facts were complete and cited.

*Major players involved in the issues were clearly presented. Supporting arguments presented accurately. Opposing arguments were represented fairly.

*Informed opinion written in paragraph form. Narrative includes both supporting and opposing arguments. Informed opinion was persuasive.

*Sources are cited correctly using APA style in reference page. In text citations are appropriate. Sentence structure is varied and essay is virtually free of grammar and surface errors. Minimum of 6 sources. Double-spaced, 12 point, and at least 6 pages in length.

PLEASE HELP ME IMPROVE THIS PAPER