ENGLISH COMP 1

This is your final draft of the rough draft you turned in week 6.  Please review the notes I sent back and make the appropriate changes.

Pick a recent change that has taken place in the world and write a 7 page essay to show its causes and/or effects to help you and your readers understand that change better.  

Writing Requirements

• 7 pages
• 5 references, including a reference for the counter-argument.
• Title page
• Reference page

NOTES: You have a very good rough draft here.  My notes are mainly a few grammatical things.  However, there are a few places where you could beef up your points with some statistics.  For example, what percentage of revenue can a company save by implementing telework practices?  Please see my notes in the body of your paper. The errors are underlined in blue.

I have already done 5 of the 7 pages work I just need someone to do the remaining 2 pages.