English A1

1. Fix thesis and outline on this.

2. Write essay on document fixed,

Thesis Statement: The movement of humans depends on these unique identities that makes them who they are. Some of the identities are opposites of each other, they can be positive, negative, or flexible by every person. For me the identity is Age, different culture, and the language barrier. Every single identity is a complement to build up my ways.

Topic Sentence about Identity 1: missing thesis sentences

Detail 1: Ability focus in work or learning is higher young people

Detail 2: target in life, experience in work by knowledge

Detail 3: Realized value in life, bad or good thing,

Topic Sentence about Identity 2: missing thesis sentences

         Detail 1: Nationality Vietnam, which is different in the USA, hard to join a new communication because Asian culture is significant.

         Detail 2: Raise up with the care of family, parents

         Detail 3: Before decide something or big problem need to help from family first that opposite in USA.

Topic Sentence about Identity 3: missing thesis sentences

         Detail 1: English is not native languages, only know through book or school, a little opportunity to practice is zero

Detail 2: Hard to converse with others, because speaking is not fluent, be shy and make international friends.

Detail 3: Challenges in learning and improving English.

Topic sentence of the conclusion (how your identities have intersected to create your unique self): missing thesis sentences

         Detail 1: experience of age helps me in work, do something easier, solve hard problems, avoid bad things.

         Detail 2: realize motivation to improve my language skills

Detail 3: Learning new cultures around me, attracted by new things such as culture, kind of person, etc…