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How Dishwashing Machines Impact Families

Student Sample

St. Petersburg College

ENC 1101: Composition I

Professor Last Name

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Overview of Dishwashers

Dishwashing machines, also known as dishwashers, are amazing inventions that have

revolutionized household chores by utilizing heat, water, and electricity to efficiently clean

dishes. Essentially, the dishes, plates, and silverware are packed into a machine that runs for a

few hours and cleans everything. Most dishwashers also have a feature for drying. These

machines are typically used by families that dirty multiple dishes for each meal. The abundance

of dirty dishes, such as bowls, drinking glasses, and eating utensils, allows the machine to be

used to its full capacity. Ever since these practical machines were invented, many have

discovered that dishwashers are incredibly beneficial to families. As such, dishwashing are both

energy efficient and sanitizing, resulting in economical and health benefits for the entire family.

Conserve Energy

Surprisingly, using a modern dishwasher actually preserves energy. For instance, dishwashers

are efficient in terms of electricity; statistics from “How Much Water” (2023) demonstrate that

“Modern dishwashers use 1.64 – 3.5 gallons of water per cycle, while hand washing uses 9 – 27

gallons” (para 7). The precise amount of water saved is astronomical. At most, 3.5 gallons is

substantially less than the minimum 9 gallons for hand washing, proving that modern

dishwashing machines, specifically ENERGY STAR machines, reduce the average energy usage

of the family, in turn decreasing household expenses. Thankfully, modern, cost-efficient

dishwashing machines have replaced a once-tedious household task, allowing families to

conserve both water and energy. Therefore, the extra savings can be used for other household

expenses, such as food, electricity, or savings for a nice vacation. The money adds up over time,

and every penny is important for families who are on a budget.

Sanitize Dishes

Furthermore, dishwashing machines sanitize dishes exceptionally well. As Szydlowski (2021)

explains, “washing dishes in the dishwasher provides much cleaner dishes than handwashing.

Even those dishes that don’t come completely clean in the washer have less bacteria on them

than most hand-washed dishes” (para 8). While the sanitizing of dishes is important for all

individuals, families are directly impacted by this invention. Families, especially those with

young children, inevitably encounter contagious, harmful germs in their day-to-day lives. Within

the home, such diseases tend to spread quickly and infect the entire family. A dishwashing

machine effectively eradicates these detrimental germs that have been left behind on dishes,

lowering the likelihood of the disease spreading. The extremely hot water provided in a

dishwashing machin destroys viruses that could otherwise spread rapidly and damage the health

and well-being of individuals within the family.

Conclusion

Finally, dishwashing machines have positively changed the lives of many families because they

conserve water as well as discourage the growth of harmful bacteria within the home. Therefore,

families with kids or extended relatives who dirty lots of dishes and silverware should definitely

use the dishwasher consistently. This brilliant invention allows people to enjoy other things in

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life, such as fun activities or the company of loved ones. Fortunately, almost every home has a

dishwasher included, and it has to be one of the most important inventions ever. Simply put the

dishes inside, hit the start button, and go spend some time watching a movie or playing a game

with the family. The utilization of dishwashing machines should be widely encouraged so that

families can fully experience the benefits of such wonderful technology.

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References

How Much Water Does A Dishwasher Use [601 Models Studied]. (2023, January 19).

EcoCostSavings. https://ecocostsavings.com/how-much-water-does-a-dishwasher-use/

Szydlowski, M. (2021, September 29). Dishwashers or hand-washing? science settles the

score. Columbia Daily Tribune.

https://www.columbiatribune.com/story/news/2021/09/29/dishwashers-hand-washing-

science-settles-score/8418843002/

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How Dishwashing Machines Impact Families

Student Sample

St. Petersburg College

ENC 1101: Composition I

Professor Last Name

Month/Day/Year

Commented [AN1]: About four (4) lines from the top, the title page begins with the Title of the essay, followed by pertinent course information.

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Overview of Dishwashers

Dishwashing machines, also known as dishwashers, are amazing inventions that have

revolutionized household chores by utilizing heat, water, and electricity to efficiently clean

dishes. Essentially, the dishes, plates, and silverware are packed into a machine that runs for a

few hours and cleans everything. Most dishwashers also have a feature for drying. These

machines are typically used by families that dirty multiple dishes for each meal. The abundance

of dirty dishes, such as bowls, drinking glasses, and eating utensils, allows the machine to be

used to its full capacity. Ever since these practical machines were invented, many have

discovered that dishwashers are incredibly beneficial to families. As such, dishwashing are both

energy efficient and sanitizing, resulting in economical and health benefits for the entire family.

Conserve Energy

Surprisingly, using a modern dishwasher actually preserves energy. For instance, dishwashers

are efficient in terms of electricity; statistics from “How Much Water” (2023) demonstrate that

“Modern dishwashers use 1.64 – 3.5 gallons of water per cycle, while hand washing uses 9 – 27

gallons” (para 7). The precise amount of water saved is astronomical. At most, 3.5 gallons is

substantially less than the minimum 9 gallons for hand washing, proving that modern

dishwashing machines, specifically ENERGY STAR machines, reduce the average energy usage

of the family, in turn decreasing household expenses. Thankfully, modern, cost-efficient

dishwashing machines have replaced a once-tedious household task, allowing families to

conserve both water and energy. Therefore, the extra savings can be used for other household

expenses, such as food, electricity, or savings for a nice vacation. The money adds up over time,

and every penny is important for families who are on a budget.

Sanitize Dishes

Furthermore, dishwashing machines sanitize dishes exceptionally well. As Szydlowski (2021)

explains, “washing dishes in the dishwasher provides much cleaner dishes than handwashing.

Even those dishes that don’t come completely clean in the washer have less bacteria on them

than most hand-washed dishes” (para 8). While the sanitizing of dishes is important for all

individuals, families are directly impacted by this invention. Families, especially those with

young children, inevitably encounter contagious, harmful germs in their day-to-day lives. Within

the home, such diseases tend to spread quickly and infect the entire family. A dishwashing

machine effectively eradicates these detrimental germs that have been left behind on dishes,

lowering the likelihood of the disease spreading. The extremely hot water provided in a

dishwashing machin destroys viruses that could otherwise spread rapidly and damage the health

and well-being of individuals within the family.

Conclusion

Finally, dishwashing machines have positively changed the lives of many families because they

conserve water as well as discourage the growth of harmful bacteria within the home. Therefore,

families with kids or extended relatives who dirty lots of dishes and silverware should definitely

use the dishwasher consistently. This brilliant invention allows people to enjoy other things in

Commented [AN2]: A level heading begins the Introduction.

Commented [AN3]: The Introduction provides a thorough, original summary of the Invention.

Commented [AN4]: The Thesis statement contains two specific effects on a certain group of people.

Commented [AN5]: A Level Heading introduces the first point.

Commented [AN6]: The Topic Sentence indicates the initial effect.

Commented [AN7]: A strong quote (APA) verifies the claim that was made in the topic sentence.

Commented [AN8]: The rest of the paragraph uses the PIE method to explain the significance of the quote as it pertains to the particular group of people.

Commented [AN9]: A Level Heading introduces the second point.

Commented [AN10]: The Topic Sentence indicates the next effect.

Commented [AN11]: A strong quote (APA) verifies the claim that was made in the topic sentence.

Commented [AN12]: The rest of the paragraph uses the PIE method to explain the significance of the quote as it pertains to the particular group of people.

Commented [AN13]: A Level Heading introduces the conclusion.

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life, such as fun activities or the company of loved ones. Fortunately, almost every home has a

dishwasher included, and it has to be one of the most important inventions ever. Simply put the

dishes inside, hit the start button, and go spend some time watching a movie or playing a game

with the family. The utilization of dishwashing machines should be widely encouraged so that

families can fully experience the benefits of such wonderful technology.

Commented [AN14]: The conclusion touches on the main idea and discusses a specific action that people should follow.

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References

How Much Water Does A Dishwasher Use [601 Models Studied]. (2023, January 19).

EcoCostSavings. https://ecocostsavings.com/how-much-water-does-a-dishwasher-use/

Szydlowski, M. (2021, September 29). Dishwashers or hand-washing? science settles the

score. Columbia Daily Tribune.

https://www.columbiatribune.com/story/news/2021/09/29/dishwashers-hand-washing-

science-settles-score/8418843002/

Commented [AN15]: The References page documents both sources alphabetically in APA format.