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 Use concrete physical details in your description and specific verbs and adjectives in your analysis, avoiding at all costs vague adjectives ("beautiful," "natural," "great," “delicious,” --and forget “awesome” or “yummy” altogether--etc.) and adverbs ("skillfully," "amazingly," "intensely" etc.) or dead metaphors ("raining cats and dogs") which are either so highly subjective or overused as to be utterly meaningless. 

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