Editing Research Paper

The issue with this paper that it has a lot direct paraphrase which make it plagrized  from resources that can be founded in the citation. Please fix all resources used in paper without changing the meaning. The paper also is to formal and boring. It has to be more excitement and used resource in the right way. 

A lot of paraphrase soundes  as its my research but matter fact its from resources so try on fixing this also.